Sharing the Sacred Pond with Possibly Poisonous Reptilians

Sharing the Sacred Pond with Possibly Poisonous Reptilians

A Poem by Pryde Foltz
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Tales from the Tragic Sip (Ep.14)

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Sharing Sacred Ponds with Possibly Poisonous Reptilians 




Tales From the Tragic Sip (Ep14) 

In this episode of Tales from the Tragic Sip I discuss how to keep yourself centered even in the chaos and how to charm snakes and Father Time. Included are the haiku Still and Sacred Pond.

© 2016 Pryde Foltz


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Pryde Foltz
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In a small village near Chu Lai, S. Vietnam I am walking in a small pond waist high water, spiced with Agent Orange, the snake entered me. Years later it manifested in illness. I sing om to the divine and thank you for your beautiful wisdom.

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

8 Years Ago

Thank you, AL. Perhaps for me the snake was a positive image … I always found a kinship with it .. read more
Alfred Kukitz

8 Years Ago

This is one of your best pictures, illuminated beauty!
Pryde Foltz

8 Years Ago

Thank you, AL:)
The progression in style and presentation is really obvious. Im only getting to Chap 14 since I was away last week.
I got the Calgon reference so I immeadiately felt really old ;)

I think inside the snake may have been screaming too.
Bravo. The best Sip yet ! Truly engaging.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

8 Years Ago

Thank you, ANTO. I am getting a hand at the editing process and becoming more confident in the chair.. read more
ANTO

8 Years Ago

It shows and it encourages the viewer to enjoy too. All the best Pryde.
Ive been away for a while....your poetry is what I miss. You tell such wonderful stories. Thank you

Posted 8 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Troy. I have been thinking about you from our private messages. I do hope you find some l.. read more
well next time I skinny dip [lord forbid ] I will watch out for white snakes
don`t think we have any here. you know that I love your poetry and the way
you present it is fablious

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Ron. There are albino breeds of most snakes … so absolutely:)
 wordman

8 Years Ago

we have plenty snakes here ,but copper head`s,rattle snake,water moccican`s are the poisionious ones.. read more
Sometimes I find the captions distracting. In the first episode I reviewed (anger) I liked the captions, but this one (and I also saw part of the narcissus one) I felt overloaded and even missed parts of the spoken poetry and went back to listen again.
Then again, I have mixed feelings about oral poetry in the first place. I love hearing the author's emphasis - but I can't dwell on the words as I could if it were written.

I liked "full ... soul" - I forget the line.
I liked "This just in from the centre of the universe".

Nature is blooming, but your allergic to it goes in my top ten list of things you've said.
Ah, and now "grandfather time is an excellent bouncer" :D


Hmm. Despite the amount of noise and fear the snake and I created - the sacred pond went no where. I'll have to think about that more.

"not my actual abs" :D :D :D :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Rose. For the most part people really seem to like the pop ups … they are fun and provi.. read more
Amazing poetry dear Poet. Always a pleasure to hear your voice.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I reposted everywhere. They love you on wordpress
Pryde Foltz

9 Years Ago

Wonderful, John. I do appreciate you:)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

My pleasure. I love your verbal poetry.

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