I was curious about the title, so I googled it and came up with fortifying foundations of buildings, reinforcing soils and and buttressing structures. In the poem, I think the author is trying to compare the life of someone with that. Build strong foundations, gain freedoms that are hard fought and prove the cynics wrong. I got that from this marvelous poem.
Amazing words shared dear Pryde. I love how you tempt the reader. I hope you are doing well and thank you for sharing your books and your thoughts.
Coyote
Helical Foundations vibrates the conscious and has to disturb the unconscious. "...an aura sullied by avaricious clutches
a mind rattled by lying lips
pleasure enslaves the will..." Anyone who grieves the loss of a love can't help but feel the layers of subtext inherent in these lines. Another gem to read again and again. Thank you for posting.
super powerful .. love the vortex .. the buttressing .. the deep belly of the beast .. magically drew me in to the danger ... avarice .. pleasures ... predators .. for me ..this poem is about so many different things but all about foundations that must survive .. duality of our one selves expresses in every aspect of life, says i ... much is risked and way too much can be the cost having helices twist and fracture .. sheesh .. well done! lots of meat in this in my opinion .. loved that read!
E.
sometimes what beats us down makes us stronger in the end and ready to face any obstacle.
The subject of this poem has gathered herself...and regardless what others think of her, she lives her life according to her own beliefs, not those of others.
j.
I was curious about the title, so I googled it and came up with fortifying foundations of buildings, reinforcing soils and and buttressing structures. In the poem, I think the author is trying to compare the life of someone with that. Build strong foundations, gain freedoms that are hard fought and prove the cynics wrong. I got that from this marvelous poem.
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