Inspiration

Boiling up inside of me,

Overtaking my thoughts.

The rage, the confusion,

I feel lost and out of control.

 

She has it, him as well,

Where did mine go?

Searching for it, pining for it,

I feel powerless and desperate.

 

Ah, my only light,

My only escape from this world.

I lack it, I need it,

I feel broken and incomplete.  

 

My god,

Give me back my

Inspiration.

Author's Note

A lack of inspiration has given me inspiration?
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Reviews

[azlamalo]

wow i really like it!

[GunMetal]

This is really good. Wow. I could relate to the feeling very well. How frustrating it is to feel like you have nothing to write about. Great work.

[Haifa]

I LOVED IT !

[Matt]

Inspiration comes through many things.
You don't need inspiration When you've got heart that shows through your poems like this. keep writing. vent till you know you have nothing left to say.
Thanks for sharing.

[JenLyn]

This is really good, I'm going through the same thing at the moment but it won't last forever. Nice write to have no inspiration. Keep it up! :) 100/100

[Lexi]

I feel the exact same way, this is really amazing work. Great job.

[Kristen]

@Daniel - Fixed it! I wasn't a big fan of it myself.
Thanks for the reviews guys!

[Daniel Gardner]

I like it but i'm not a big fan of cussing in writing. But I like this though.

[Ruth]

That can be a great thing! lol This is a good piece, sometimes, lack of inspiration can lead to new writing and new adventures in the mind lol xx

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think it was a good poem. I need inspiration. Tim is trying to help me though he was the one who inspired me to write before haha. Thanks for sharing. :)