I Hate You Because I Don't Hate You At All

Just a little poem I thought of. Review if it pleases you much? Thanks {:

I hate the way you walk.

The way you talk,

The way you move.

I hate your f*****g smile.

How it makes me melt

Into a puddle of my

Own stupidity.

I hate the way your eyes are blue

And how, when you're away,

I look at the sky and think,

"Damn I really miss you right now."

I hate the way everyone loves you,

Even though nobody knows the real you

But me.

I hate how you tell me your secrets.

How you say you love me when we cuddle

On the couch.

I hate how you tell me I'm beautiful.

How you compare me to raindrops

On a tulip.

Crisp, clean beautiful.

I hate how good you are to me.

Because I don't f*****g deserve you.

Even though you say that everyone

Deserves someone.

I don't deserve anyone.

But you know what I hate the most?

How you kiss me and make me

Forget my name.

How you make me feel,

If it's only just a second,

That I am someone,

And I am worthy of love.

I hate how you make me realize

That I can't hate you.

Because you're the only person in the world

That I love.

Reviews

[Doug Ordunio]

As I said in your other poem, you keep saying "the way", but I personally don't know what you mean. Why not make a vow to never use those two words for the next two months? There's intensity when you're talking about "the other person," but you avoid talking about yourself. Did you ever ask why that is so?

[RLT's Heart]

I like it. @AK-I think poetry is an expression of self. No rules. It doesn't have to fit in a box. Just my opinion

[Crinkle°]

wow it seems to be written by a very sensitive person...

[AK]

This would actually be a very good piece of work except for the F-bomb. There really is no reason to use that type of language in expressive writing in my opinion unless you happen to live in a prison. There are so many other perfectly good words to use and explore.
Maybe I'm a little stuffy... but when I get to that word (or variations of it) I usually just stop reading. I did finish this piece and I genuinely think it's really good except for the gratuitous profanity.