Smoke and Mirrors

Coiled columns of smoke
Rise from the smoldering butt
Breathe dagger snow flakes... 
 

Reviews

[Fernando Pessoa]

I can feel the darkness envelope the words and this place of ethereal reflections. This is just brilliant.

Irish Proverb: "Smoke your pipe and be silent; there's only wind and smoke in the world."

[Jean P. Prudhomme]

the last line surprised me....it's curious .... the first two little lines make the rise of cigarette smoke seem epic....a beautiful senryu

[Orlando Murcia]

Very nice choice of words
especially the part about

" Breath dagger snow flakes "

Nice work

Orlando M

[~Shadow Kissed~]

:) nice.