The False and Beauty

The False and Beauty

A Poem by Lenah Mehzabin

I’ve been glaring at it

For so long

Long enough when I saw them leave

They disappeared..

Yes, Dews

Proudly acted like diamonds - false

It reminds me of something …love?

No, maybe it’s passion

But live cuddling the soma of it (love)

It reminds me of something … promise?

Yes,

But only when they are broken

Intentionally?

Maybe .. No?

It’ just a strange nature

Nature just like .. how the dew are gone

We call it nature’s beauty

right?

Then what’s that?

Love’s beauty?

…… then I should follow it too

Just like every one else

This time I will be dew

 

 

 

© 2015 Lenah Mehzabin


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yes, love. be love.
I love this.
I got stuck in essay season and was sad to miss all your pretty words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such an honor .I am sorry that I'm late ,pardon me dear .I missed you too :)
an interesting conclusion...to take, let alone make. But could you really ever be ...the dew?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

No but again yes ... maybe in a human way but i really wish if i was a dew instead of human
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Chris

6 Years Ago

It's hard being yourself when you sooo want to be ...yourself.
Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Certainly you are really right ..
Yes, Dews
Proudly acted like diamonds - false
It reminds me of something …love?
No, maybe it’s passion.

Vivid image and clear write. Great one. Love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you soo much ! .. I'm glad :)
This is deep poetry
I enjoy the whole poem but my fav part was this one
''Then what’s that?
Love’s beauty?''
Makes me wonder what really is the beauty of love...
Enjoyable and excellent poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! : )
What great writing - very alluring, clever and beautiful. Wow. Thank you again. Dale

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dale ! :) .. so glad
Confuser

6 Years Ago

Y/W, great poem!
Of course, you're a beauty on dew. Well, sounds good by me.. doesn't it? Of course, it does. Nice poetry/well pen'd words/flow's amazing. Loved the imagery that's expressing the wonder of beauty coming down to every-heart in disguise of pleasurable love. Yes, everybody should fall in love, cause everybody's made up of love. But when it comes to pain, then don't forget, just like everybody falls into love, everybody gets poured themselves into the shower of pain as well. Very nice theme. Read something sexy in a day.

... would be checking out your more poems this day!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Arsh

6 Years Ago

Stupid - Girl! Hhaha!
Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

hehehe very funny cute one ; )
u not gonna get relief of that :p ;)
Arsh

6 Years Ago

Lol - neither I want to get that not at all. Your love's enough to keep me always around ecstasy. Co.. read more

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Lenah Mehzabin
Lenah Mehzabin

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I consider myself an independent thinker and writer. I started writing here in the writer's cafe from the age of fifteen and with all the bittersweet memories, I must say time really flies. I am a gro.. more..

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