Beguiled In Mirage

Beguiled In Mirage

A Poem by Lenah Mehzabin

 


Grafting the prints of one night

Suffocated mind

With soft dim of moonlit

Between them - the two hills

She was floating quite      

Un- darkened princess

She licked them both

One named “Gem “owned gems

One named” Pebble” of harsh games

Differences so clear

 In naked eye

 Yet.. after decades of awning

The question of “Tale”

Surrounds our mind

Why her waves welted  pebble,

Burnt in fire - one that only stone makes

Why she chose rough surface, where river dries

Over Gems  - Who screamed her name 

© 2015 Lenah Mehzabin


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Very imaginative and evocative. The writer (you) has made usage of a few words to poetically underline the division between want and lack affected by choices. What is most impressive about this verse is the depiction of imagery to elicit the visions of the "suffocated mind".

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much !! .I'm happy that you liked it and i'm really sorry for late reply
Reeti

5 Years Ago

oh... i'm sorry too for seeing this message late. =P



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Very imaginative and evocative. The writer (you) has made usage of a few words to poetically underline the division between want and lack affected by choices. What is most impressive about this verse is the depiction of imagery to elicit the visions of the "suffocated mind".

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lenah Mehzabin

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much !! .I'm happy that you liked it and i'm really sorry for late reply
Reeti

5 Years Ago

oh... i'm sorry too for seeing this message late. =P
Very beautifula and unique. Loved the title very much :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much ! I'm glad u liked it :)
enjoyed reading this.... thank you... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Oh it's really sweet of u .Glad u liked it : ))
One named “Gem “owned gems

One named” Pebble” of harsh games

(quotations need some adjustments.)

I see an transfusion in you words, the battlement of mixtures if you will. It seems to speak of origins, “The question of Tales.” But then reflects as your title suggest a mirage. Are we looking at two separate beings envying the others traits, hoping to mesh perfection into one entity? The burnt in fire, suggest they're melted together, becoming whole, a mixture of qualities.

There is a chance I'm reading into it, as I often do, in which case disregard; but I found it to be an enjoyable read, and displays your skill and a ever growing talent.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Well thank you so much for your words.I really appreciate .And about the poem > There is a story hid.. read more
Your writing have such a beauty that reader connects till the end. beautiful write dear, great work done.

The question of “Tale”
Surrounds our mind
Why her waves welted pebble,

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Thank u so for such an honor .I'm so glad u liked it and enjoyed my poems : )
7ofspades

6 Years Ago

I like how you made the connection between human nature and nature (no pun intended) thanks for shar.. read more
Lenah Mehzabin

6 Years Ago

Glad u liked it : )

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Added on January 17, 2015
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Tags: Mirage, broken, lost, dead in love, a tale, imaginary

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Lenah Mehzabin
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A Poem by Lenah Mehzabin