what if you took a chance?

what if you took a chance?

A Poem by Luna Lucretia Lawson
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A poem about taking risks

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what if you took a chance?
What if the world died tomorrow?
would you regret the life you have lived?
would you look back at your past?
would you be proud?
What if you never took a chance at life?
would you accept the challenge and risk?
to make the future better and brighter,
what if you never lived the life you wanted?
would you take a second chance?
to change your fate,
would you start anew?

© 2014 Luna Lucretia Lawson


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This reminds me of Divergent. While reading it I picture Tris jumping off that building into Dauntless territory.
I like this piece a lot. It has a great message.
Take a chance.
Well played! ^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luna Lucretia Lawson

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, i am glad you like it
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. ^^

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Luna Lucretia Lawson
Luna Lucretia Lawson

littlehampton, United Kingdom



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Hey my name is Luna, i am 19 and i like writing, drawing and painting and reading, i like manga and anime also i love video games. I love doing research on mythology, languages superpowers. My favori.. more..

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