I want to...

This poem is about wanting to experience all life has to offer with someone you care for deeply.

I want to see you live your dreams, 
Achieve greatness and be happy,
And I want to be a part of your life when you do,
'Cause I keep imagining spending my life with you, 
Seeing amazing places with you,
Sharing moments where we are both breathless, lost for words.
I want to see you smiling, hear you laugh, 
And I want to love you. 

I want to be able to share memories with you, good and bad.
I want to be able to hold you when you're upset 
And tell you things are going to be okay, 
Because I would try my best to make it okay, 
To make it better for you. 
And I know you would do the same for me.

I want to see you when I wake up, a smile would flood my face.
I want to talk to you deeply
About things we don't have answers to.
I want to get to know you every single day, 
Because I understand that people change. 
You will change, but so will I. 

I not only want to share my mind with you but my body too. 
I want to kiss you like it's the first time, every time. 
And I want to feel my love for you flowing through my veins like blood,
Warming me up and making my heart beat faster
Every time I see your beautiful face. 

You stole my heart years ago, and you can keep it,
Because forever I am yours.

Author's Note

Your little appreciation and honest feedback make me write even more. A person who feels appreciated will always do more than expected.

Reviews

[Perdition]

A true voice...you found the key I take it so I'll leave the praise for I too suffer the same affliction and what you have found whether real or not makes of no difference...it is your voice and you've written it well. A great poem or letter sir..well done.

[Amada]

You don't need to call me "Sir", I am only 18

[Amada]

And thank you so much sir

[Perdition]

Not meant to represent the age but respect for the quality of poem.

[Flowers of Eternity]

What a heart warming poem, it is so filled with your emotions and I really felt it.
Keep up the good work!

[Amada]

Thanks for your kind review 😊 😊 😊

[LazerRays]

Awwwww is so cute!!!! I love sweet love poetry like this :3 literally so adorable! People would die to have a partner this sweet. Luckily I got myself someone who's sweet and honestly the world to me :P
nice job! I'm still melting. This is the only toe of love poetry I like and you nailed it perfectly!!! Awesome! And cute :D

[Amada]

Ohh thank you so much Sarah, BTW congratulation 😊😊😘

[LazerRays]

Thank you so much!

[Onlyme]

Beautifully expressed, emotions for someone you hold dear, but sadly doesn't return the same feelings back towards you. Openhearted, pure undying love and admiration.

[Amada]

Thanks dawn, I hope you enjoyed it😊😊😊

[Onlyme]

I really did Rahul. your a big softy at heart. Hugs.

[Amada]

Thanks dawn for hugs ♥ ♥ ♥

[Chris Shaw]

You are in love my friend. Your lines express that so well. Hope it all works out for you.

Chris

[Amada]

You've got it right ma'am ♥♥♥.
Thanks for reading.

[Najam Us Saher]

Very passionate. I really liked this poem, too moved to say anything else.

[Amada]

Thanks najam 😊 😊 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Taniska 😊€..]

Nice lines , show it to your gf . She will be happy okk . keep writing ((smiles)) 😊😊😊

[Amada]

Dekh li usne, thanks for suggestion 😊 😊 😊

[Taniska 😊😊]

Good !! Your most welcome ((smiles)) 😊😊😊

[Tamara Beryl Latham]

Sounds like love to me. You've expressed yourself nicely in this poem and I hope she appreciates your effort. :-)

[Amada]

Thanks Tamara for reading 😊😊😊