When I woke up in 2070!

When I woke up in 2070!

A Story by Amada

*Wakes up*

*Not aware about the time warp*

“Hello Mr. Rahul, welcome to year 2070”

Me: What 2070? Yesterday only it was 3rd December 2018. And by the way, who’s this?

House: It’s me, your house!

Me: Haha nice joke!

House: Let me shake my body, baby!

*House starts shaking*

Me: Stop! Stop! Stop! I can’t believe I just skipped 52 years in a day.

House: I know you won’t believe me, here see this show on Net Geo Channel.

Me: Where is TV?

House: Close your eyes and see it through your mind!

*As soon as I close my eyes, The Story of GOD Season 70 by MorganFreemans starts playing in front of me*

Me: *Opens eyes* This means, this means that I am really in 2070? And it also means that the world has developed very much by now. Flying Cars, Portable Houses, Moving Buildings, etc. all these things are outside! Can’t wait to see them!

*Starts Running towards the main door*

House: Wait Rahul, wait!

Me: *Ignores*

*Goes outside*

Me: Damn, too much pollution! I can’t see anything.

House: *Hangs a mask near me* Here, Wear it!

Me: *Wears it* Yes, now I can see everyone! And all of them are wearing this thing only. What’s going on?

House: Instead of finding solution to a problem, Humans have started adjusting with it. Population is automatically controlled, by death, due to pollution. Also, the Amazon Forest is now a high tech city. And Total countries on Earth are 1000!

Me: 1000? What the hell!

House: Yes. States and cities demanded for freedom. Citizens agreed! Now, even districts are about to be divided.

Me: What about country Leaders?

House: Robots are the leaders! Humans are the followers. I feel sad!

*Just then Robot Police flying car picks me up*

Me: What are you doing?

Robot Police: You’re an Alien, you’re an Alien!

*While I am in their car, I see huge buildings with Zig-zag elevators, but they all are empty*

Me: Why are the buildings empty?

Robot Police: An emergency situation has been created after a robot killed Human. Both Humans and Robots are doing riots at various places!

Me: It’s too late for Humans to unite! By the way, where are you taking me?

Robot Police: We are going to throw you below at “Corpse Land”.

Me: What? No!

*They keep a piece of paper in my pocket and throw me out from the flying car*

Me: *Shouts for help*

*Wakes up*

Mom: What happened?

Me: *Looks Around*

Mom: Relax Rahul, it was just a dream!

Me: *Checks pocket*

*A piece of paper is there*

Reads it:

“No Rahul. It wasn’t a dream. Wake up, wake up Humans before it’s too late!”

© 2018 Amada


Author's Note

Amada
Your little appreciation and honest feedback make me write even more. A person who feels appreciated will always do more than expected.

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Loved it....What you told through this writing is a really important message for mankind..We need to actually wake up before its too late..Otherwise the situation will be like you described in this story..And at that time , no one will be able to do anything regarding it...You expressed your thoughts in a brilliant way...I hope that more people will think the way you think...Great work...Keep it up..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Take care
Riddhi

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amada

6 Years Ago

Thanks time nikalne k liye 😊😊😊



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Reminds me of 'Soylent Green'
What indeed does await?
Good imaginative account, like to see more
Dave

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Amada

6 Years Ago

Thanks sir for reading 😊😊😊.
Waiting for your reviews
YOU. SHOULD. WRITE. THIS. STORY. Like in full. It would be so gripping. I wanna read it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amada

6 Years Ago

Thanks ma'am 😊😊😊
You bring serious issues to light in a satirical way. I love that about your writings.
Important messages very well conveyed. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Amada

6 Years Ago

Thanks najam 😊😊😊
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Loved it....What you told through this writing is a really important message for mankind..We need to actually wake up before its too late..Otherwise the situation will be like you described in this story..And at that time , no one will be able to do anything regarding it...You expressed your thoughts in a brilliant way...I hope that more people will think the way you think...Great work...Keep it up..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Take care
Riddhi

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amada

6 Years Ago

Thanks time nikalne k liye 😊😊😊
Very clever! I enjoyed it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amada

6 Years Ago

Thanks Junglee
You think great . Your story is amazing . Keep writing Rahul ((smiles)) 😊😊😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amada

6 Years Ago

Thank you tanu 😊😊😊
Taniska  😊😊

6 Years Ago

Your most welcome !! 😊

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Added on December 4, 2018
Last Updated on December 5, 2018
Tags: Human, pollution, robot, Earth.

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Amada
Amada

India



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