Touch

I have run a lot; just come and have me rejuvenated

 

Touch

 

When half of the world falls asleep,

You keep me awoken the rest of the night

 

When half of them are in their mid-dreams or

At the outset of another dream after completing the

Previous ones, you bring me your unspoken desire to

Hold you!

 

When half of them generally treat agony as bad part of life,

You come and say, “Pain…I want pain like a sweetest song!’

And it stays

Long after it has gone

 

When half of them finally take an oath of not to get close,

You suddenly vanishes in me with your magical touch

 

And I lay virtually on the stone, fighting to get me…

 

Deeper the rhythm,

Faster the storm

You stop in the middle like a rock

Behind which sets the sun and rises

On the temple of your flesh!

 

I am in the lull

As quite not often

As to find the job of love at the zenith,

Whereupon you made your city

Where I stay—

 

‘Tis all about your touch

That fuels me on saying

I love you, my dear,

As nights start!

 

Just touch the heaven taking me with you

 

When half of them cheer,

You tell me an old song

And I sing with your notes

With a backdrop tune of a piper!!

Reviews

[The Autumn Faerie]

Another beautiful, enthralling write!

[Kitty]

"When half of them generally treat agony as bad part of life,
You come and say, "Pain�I want pain like a sweetest song!'
And it stays
Long after it has gone"

This is my favourite stanza. So beautiful!!!! This really is a deep poem.
Nice write!!

Josie

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Oh my . . . this is a quite complex and deep poem. I love the lines . . .

"When half of them generally treat agony as bad part of life,
You come and say, "Pain�I want pain like a sweetest song!'
And it stays
Long after it has gone"

I see this stanza as "hope". Looking at pain as not a burden, but as a blessing.

And then . . .

"am in the lull
As quite not often
As to find the job of love at the zenith,
Whereupon you made your city
Where I stay-"

This makes me recognize true love and devotion, without fear.

A pleasure and privilege to read, dear poet friend,

Thank you!