Prologue

       Dark. It was dark everywhere. Those rain droplets danced pain on my numb lips. My fear dread legs shivered. Rain was always my solace. As I cried, its droplets would get mixed with my tears and it seemed to share my pain. But, for the first time it killed me. My heart's burden increased with moments passing. Why was it to be blamed? I was the one who changed, and turned a devil.

           The world around me had fallen and I was shattered, but I deserved what I got. Guilt is not the right word enough to express when you know your own hands were capable of taking the life of the ones who had given you life. What a cruel joke life played on me? 

       

       My tears got dried, but the coldness of my heart continued to make me sink in the darkness. The thunders made my shivering body still and my eyes closed not able to face the shower of pain. 

       

   After what felt like eternity of suffering my hands moved like a baby in the calm wind. My legs did a movement  in the marshy ground as my eyes opened to receive the rays of sunshine. But, the world of mine was still dark, fearful and guilt-filled.

Author's Note

The cover picture's credit doesn't go to me. I had googled the picture. I have just edited it and gave a few touches to the image and put up the text to make the cover.

Thanks for reading. Hope you people liked it. Please give your views. Appreciations and Criticisms are welcome.

Reviews

[747]

A good start. It would be more catching if you didn't jump so much with so little explanation. Right now it's hard to follow as the gaps of information are too large to jump; at least for my brain anyway.

I think you've got a solid concept and a good foundation to build on, but you haven't got all of the bricks in place yet.

[Rainslover]

Thank you! This is my first novel work. I've posted the first chapter if you would like to read. And even there I feel there are gaps. I would like to cover up them in my further chapters. Thank you for the review! :)

http://www.writerscafe.org/link/658744/

[jeannemarie coulter]

clean vision in prose form...will read again from your work

[Rainslover]

Thank you! :)

[Bear]

Interesting beginning, I will reserve judgement on this till you have developed it more. Should be fun reading it nonetheless :~)

[Rainslover]

Thank you so much! Will be looking forward for your review! :)

[FaeryQueen]

this is a great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Rainslover]

Thank you soooo muchhh!!!

[Dave Weber]

Good start. I've never killed anyone, but I've had nightmares a couple of times that I did and this comes close to capturing the feeling I had in those dreams realizing I'd done the irrevocable.

[Rainslover]

That feeling is the worst and I have had that too, lately, but they have stopped now. Thanks!