Stars

Stars

A Poem by Robin
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Dream walker 
and a lunar rain 

rice paper boats and a secret temple  
a pagoda of origami silhouettes 
three steps - a woman 
patience in blue  
silk of silence   
the living room 

     plush 

Velvet and wood 

ornate gaze upon the walls - 

     intense. 



footsteps behind 

fingers over my eyes - 

" What do you see ? "   

                                  I feel you  ...  


auburn fur
coat of synesthesia


across the room 
legs gesture 
your fingers scrying my palms  
we rose 
to the simple  
a bed in the middle  
we laid down and looked up  - 


      stars stars and stars 


etched in those surreal nights 

salvation 


you and the way -

               we looked at each other 










copyright 2013 Robin Amaral 

© 2013 Robin


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lifts one on the gentle updraft of aesthetics to then soar on the racing wind. Here the Occident meets the Orient and entwined exult in the heavenly. Indeed the most skillful brush often uses the fewest strokes, and each masterfully shapes the wide canvas of creativity with your unique and embracive style, rendered all the more enjoyable by the ample spaces provided for other artists interactive imaginings. Merci beaucoup!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Lovely write,, stars the universe silence and love all speak.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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yes. well done. so refreshing to find someone on this site who can write with silences.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Silence ...clears the way for humbling grace...



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're a true listener.... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Exquisite, this is what I love to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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i adore the way you describe the scene.... to me it's so real, it can all be touched and felt and loved... all the possibilities of the universe in facing each other and looking through to the soul.. and more.. traveling in & out again.. this is exactly as it should be!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is very beautiful. It almost makes me think I can resurrect a dream again. The best dream.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A romantic interlude certainly can open up the doorway of deliverance--
the stars and the infinite possibilities.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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' we laid down and looked up - stars stars and stars ~ etched in those surreal nights ~ salvation ~ you and the way - we looked at each other '

have heard of words written in the stars but never actually believed it - until now. Beautiful brevity yet full of .. everything.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

life should be seen through the lenses of those sweet moments...reminds me of Pablo Neruda somehow..your work is always so passionate..."I want to eat the sunbeam flaring in your loveliness" seems to somehow fit

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express . Feel my words , look as deeply into yo.. more..

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