Sidewalk flowers

Sidewalk flowers

A Poem by Robin
"

She had long black hair

"

 

citykitty curbside streetrhyme clickyheels feeling

 

hipsway coolstrut barethreading indigo and gold

 

mean beats concrete cool lacewishes hoppin'

 

quickpop storefront windowglare expletives

 

love 

 

bright light night neonspirit firewalker

 

jack straightup  and  nevernever rules

 

no to no not to make her mistake her or try to break her   

 

owns the room room to roam roam to rome 

 

where all roads lead to home  

 

in a sunrise mindrush in mandarin grey  

 

and her crumpled bed that consumates her day  

 

anotherday her day her way

 

tilted jilted   mary go round and down with alice  

 

in the fuss of a bus stop gutter

 

her gutter  her rain  her pain

 

and laughs 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All photography and writing property of Robin Amaral .
Do not copy or use without expressed written consent .
Copyright © 2006-2011 Robin Amaral


 

© 2012 Robin


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somehow you've made this read like a canvas that's been painted with music. this part right here:

bright light night neonspirit firewalker

jack straightup and nevernever rules

no to no not to make her mistake her or try to break her

that part gets a hearty 'mmmmmm....'

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I was there I admit it...your rhyme is as smooth as a cake mix..loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wonderfully playful rythyms and rhymes; this piece danced it's way into my heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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yeah, sure, i turn my back to this place for 30 mins and here you are - painting the town red. or indigo and gold - or anyway...twisting and twirling it at your own pleasure...:) and at others' pleasure too :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


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snap snap with a towel from the rack racklol
seriously~this is mind rhythm rushing the cicada veins~ bzzzzzz

Posted 12 Years Ago


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rapsnap, singadacious partyclap

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I love this! I love the combined words that lend so well to the beat and rhythm.
"bright light night neonspirit firewalker
jack straightup and nevernever rules "

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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