Scratch

more metaphoria

 

of metaphoria and linguistic stretching 

 

chocolate bagels and funny jewelry

 

of acerbic wit and smiling moonfaces

 

of gypsum and required rollcalls

 

 

of flashback summers and long dryspells

 

Prolific and wanting more

 

wings and passing ships

 

of french philosophers and daydreams

 

 

missing stars and broken cameras

 

silk moths and one brief dawn

 

congratulations to the brave

 

Vive le poète

 

 

Reviews

[Circe]

this made me smile big time! I think it is very much the essence of you.... the spontaneity and love for different things... both beautiful and wondrous... feels like I am floating on a cloud in your imagery.... wispy tendrils of idealism.... the dreamer dreams on!

[Desert Dreamer]

I am left breathless...as if your words let me create my own vision, as if you are seeing into my own experiences...your words are magic.

[FireWoman]

The magic of the poet is to tell a story with what others do not take time to notice. Artists make life alive not mundane. Short & sassy I like it.

[Tina Kline]

Very enjoyable blending of images to create a whole.

[Hayley]

Wow, your descriptions here are marvelous!! You put a whole bunch of seemingly random items into beautiful phrases!

[MissAngelica]

I love " of gypsum and required rollcalls" love love love this piece!!

[Audrey Howitt]

An array of "ofs" which make my heart sing. Loved this piece---

You dare! you did it! wonderful ramblings! loved to read! you're an artist in writing all what's in your heart out translated to the bone.

[Muse]

That's it? But you have only just scratched the surface! Your words kept me hanging as if I was on the edge of a cliff. I wanted to dive off and read more..... more! But then it ends with a brief Vive le poète ~ It's almost rude. ;)
Well penned my friend.

[Brad]

did you do this one before? it seems so familiar...

hell of a write, man, diggin those depths you take us into that infinite mind of yours

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woven words into a silken sheet..like music to the ears and passion in the hearts..the last line..smiling..