Prime

Prime

A Poem by Robin
"

lucidity

"
 
The dream is Primal 
 
our nature 
 
our beginnings
 
the bounce of chance
 
through the tesseract pachinko machinations of imagination
 
geologic fractals reflected
 
within the gazing ball of the infinite chromatic
 
the spectrum of wonder
 
in the pause of a prismatic ... dewdrop
 
a moment 
 
all held in the magic 
 
of the seed and the egg 
 
of creation ~
 
 
 
 
 
All images and writing property of Robin Amaral . Do not copy or use without expressed written consent .
All rights reserved.  Copyright © 2012 Robin
 

© 2012 Robin


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'within the gazing ball of the infinite chromatic'

a great image in a poem that uncovers the inexplicable core of humanity, as fundamental as breathing. i was reading today about the red deer cave people and your poem left me thinking about them again, that sense of primal, the instinctive, almost forgotten ancestral core of man. fantastic writing.

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primal things have been stirring lately. I love the appearance of the tesseract in this, moreso perhaps because it is paired with the instantly auditory pachinko machine. i am struck every time by the way you spin the magic on the wonder-wheel of the sciences.
all is.
bang-o

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'within the gazing ball of the infinite chromatic'

a great image in a poem that uncovers the inexplicable core of humanity, as fundamental as breathing. i was reading today about the red deer cave people and your poem left me thinking about them again, that sense of primal, the instinctive, almost forgotten ancestral core of man. fantastic writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Can't say it any better than Ed did.
To be in that moment is habit forming!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow what a great first read of the day--clarity--lucidity and such beauty within the moment--Thank you Robin!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bang, prime time

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

first poem I've read today....
good stuff.
filled me up.
cheers!


Posted 12 Years Ago


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it's the small gem stones that are the most interesting to look at, that reflect the mighty wonders, that spark the hues and winds of the universe of the mind lit bright by the beating rhythms of the heart.

ah, lucidity.... first and last.
Bravo.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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