Butterfly

I see you in this butterfly,

it's wings, so intricate,

weaving a web of beauty

to intrigue all admirers

I see you in this butterfly

so dainty, so unaware

never admiring itself, 

but beautiful, always. 

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

Nice. Butterflies are amazing and magical creations

[Alexa Tasch]

short but beatuiful! Its well written and flows nicely! Great poem!

[K-mo]

this is really beautiful! Nice write!!!

[Theresa]

Very lovely. Such an admirable trait in nature yet so few humans possess. You captured so much meaning in few words. Love that!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Awwh, this expresses a lot of meaning within two short stanzas. I truly enjoyed reading this since it's wonderfully written. I like the comparsion of the person it's about to a butterfly. I found that unique and really beautiful. I do think butterflies aren't aware of how beautiful they are since they never admire themselves. Butterflies are amazing insects and it'd be good to be compared to one! Great job, and keep writing! :))

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[afra]

this was amazing ....i love it

[That_Girl]

Very creative way to express a feeling of love. Beautiful words hun!

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Expressing love with a butterfly never thought of that! You've got a vivid imagination! 100/100 Loved it!

[Dr. Wood ?]

beautifully put......shows love