Blind Irony

Blind Irony

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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A poem about a small girl experienceing blindness and how it effects her outlook. Its about taking things for granted, loss, and appreciation. its a good read so try it out! :-)

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Little one
In meadow green
Hides her eyes
Of amazing sheen
Soon they fade
And turn blank white
So now her world
Is only night
Feather blindfold
Flutters down

While she crawls
Upon the ground
She gazes sun-ward
Like a dream
From Pearly eyes
Comes a quiet
Crystal stream

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.


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wonderful beautiful amaxing poem great read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great poem. I really like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


reallllllllly wonderful......!!!!!
great work....!!!!
very very well done....!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

lol thank you glad you think so
Saumya

8 Years Ago

you are highly welcomed..!!!!
:)
Unique poem. I like how well you express blindness and how well the imagery is. Nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

why thank you :-) I do try and keep things interesting
This has been beautifully throughout, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

thank you :-) it's a personal favorite of mine as well
I really do enjoy this. Your writing is always gorgeous.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

aww thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoy it :-D
Akira

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.
very sad, but she sounds pretty tough...she will adapt...the youth are often stronger than we give them credit for being.

jacob

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

Too true
That's totally amzin', your ink's damn nice, wonderful words in each n every line...awesome really, your writin' language's so much effective n efficient as well, just touched me from inner your this writin'.
good luck 4 you next writin'....don't say you're a professional writer ??lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

I'm serious I'm not a pro I'm just an ordinary high school girl. This is a piece close to my heart .. read more
I like the flow and the language, very good!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

than k you S.R. I'm glad you enjoyed it

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Added on August 24, 2012
Last Updated on September 19, 2012
Tags: child, kid, small, blind, cry, blindfold, sun, night, eyes, nature, meadow, pale, disabeled, loss, thankful, learning, lesson, heal

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Emily Dickinson Jr.
Emily Dickinson Jr.

FL



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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..

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