Never Enough

Never Enough

A Poem by Sarah Rayne

How could you look at me that way?

After playing your cruel game

Causing me all that pain

You should hang your head in shame

 

It was never enough to rip my heart out

You had to tear it to pieces

It was never enough to break me down

You had to watch me bleed

 

I'm gonna make you regret

The day you met me

The day you met me

 

Your life will become a living hell

Sabotage in your future, I fortell

I'm gonna make you bleed

The way you made me

 

It was never enough to rip my heart out

You had to tear it to pieces

It was never enough to break me down

You had to watch me bleed

 

I'm gonna make you regret

The day you met me

The day you met me

 

It was never enough

Never enough

Never enough

© 2008 Sarah Rayne


Author's Note

Sarah Rayne
Something I wrote fairly quickly. I'm not sure if I'm too happy with it so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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wow that was deep really great work love your form and you poem but its like a song also but i hope if this is about you and someone you have known that you can get over all this hurt and maybe some day find in your heart to forgive not for them so much as for you because know one is worth hurting youy soul but i think you did a really wonderful job great write it would really scare me to think some one felt that way about me but people get hurt and done wrong and this is what happens after words.hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love the way this poem has a ring of truth around it. I think it also sounds a lot like it should be a song. I love this poem. Excellent write! Keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this poem, I like people who aren't afraid to tell it like it is. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow that was deep really great work love your form and you poem but its like a song also but i hope if this is about you and someone you have known that you can get over all this hurt and maybe some day find in your heart to forgive not for them so much as for you because know one is worth hurting youy soul but i think you did a really wonderful job great write it would really scare me to think some one felt that way about me but people get hurt and done wrong and this is what happens after words.hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 18, 2008
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Sarah Rayne
Sarah Rayne

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