Jester

My Queen! My Queen! I Jump and sing for you!

As knights steal rusts, for you my tricks stay new!

My jokes are art,

For you from my heart!

But to you i am only a fool...

Author's Note

I Strayed from the Traditional Limerick 10,10,7,7,10 syllable format. but i think it keeps the vibe a Limerick Normally Has. this is 10,10,4,5,9
Tell me what you think!! :D

Reviews

[Lea Walker]

Great poem. I like the joker point of view and how he feels about his queen.

[Reeg]

Thanks you (:

[Echoes of Eros]

Ah, what a brilliant twist, and a limerick that holds a wondrously magical, ancient feel! And though upbeat, as the form often is, you still weave in a sorrowful end. xo

[Reeg]

All a Part of the Plan my friend (: I am happy you liked it!

[T.S. Claus]

This one is great! Simple but powerful :)

[Reeg]

Thank You! :D

[valerie7412]

Oh, it sounds like the jester loves his Queen! It is a lot like a love story to me! Oh that is so sad! I hope she loves him back. But probably does not.

[Reeg]

Ah yes that was my intentions (:to make the a limerick that sounded sweet in rhyme but bitter sweet in Story.
Thanks for the Review!: D

[valerie7412]

You're welcome, and bittersweet does oddly comfort my weird soul. So thank you

[AaronFreitas]

I like this piece... I haven't tried this format but I thought it worked. I like the picture that goes along with it also :) Good work

[Not here]

i like it :) the limerick is really good even though i havent read many, but i like the rhyme too. im kinda a rhyme junky, lol

[Reeg]

From reading your works you have a real skill when it comes to rhyme so from you that means alot (: Thank you!