Fire

WIP

 

Hate

            Hated

                        Hatred

I Hate

          You Hate

 

He Hates               She Hates

 

Conjugate it all you want

No Punctuation or Grammar

No wall of commas or periods

Can stand against

 

That twisting fire

 

It coils and chokes

Catching the words

Before they leave your mind

                       

   Smothering your chest

 

It fills,                       It flows,                        It burns

 

Leaves nothing

           And Destroys so much

 

So dangerous  

But we refuse

                            To Let go

Hate

                        Hated

                                                Hatred

I Hate

          You Hate

 

He Hates               She Hates

 

They hate

                      We all Hate

               

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the point made in your words. Hate had no where to go but more hate. A powerful poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Zak]

I love the truth of this poem...
"that twisting fire
catching the words before they leave your mind."

Extremely powerful and truth. Well done.

ZTF

[Tomás Ó C..]

Hate destroys all touched by it...

[Crazy Cat Man]

Hatred is poison and we must learn to not get mad so easily. this poem is a reminder of that. :) great piece
now its

Love
be loved

loving

:D

[JRB]

what a hard write, sad but real,
Jan/uisiom

[JRB]

Nice choices of words to describe your hate, but hate will soon fill your heart, hate where love once had its start. For when your hurt in the end its not hate that should let you win. It was thought opening.
Jan/Uisiom

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Love this. Your ability as a free form writer is exponential! Keep these coming!

[John Stussy]

Intrestig format, if you changed the fnt color and maybe the font itself, the very poem may seem to be on fire with the hatred you describe so very well with your words. Do we all hate simply because we are human?