EXTENSION

EXTENSION

A Poem by Rene Velez

I reach for purchase,
the air has given me need,
flights of nature,
and I am it's purpose
the wind is my friend,
a given savior
for me for I am free
with every breath, I extend
for I have been given wings
my colors, a multitude of things,
I am Gods reinvention,
yellows and greens of envy,
I feast from the suns medley
and blend as natures extentions...

© 2012 Rene Velez


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I am Gods reinvention,

Gods ways are certainly mysterious, and you capture this thought perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Soul stirring, that's for sure.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Artwork and words were amazing. Your words gave life to this poem. Nature beauty is for the wise to see. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ah, how I love you sense of the macbre and love in one breath, that imagery that surrounds even the newest of readers, is nothing short of perfect, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love that image of trying to grasp at the wind, as a friend, and especially the description of the self as God's reinention. So much packed into so few words, really masterful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


HOW SWEET. IT MAKES ME SMILE. AND LORD KNOWS I NEED TO SMILE RIGHT ABOUT NOW.

Posted 12 Years Ago


just feels colorful and like the ability to fly ..in the wording.. i'll reread it and see exactly why ..but I like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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To have the gift of flight..naturally of course..wouldn't that beathing to behold..wonderful thoughts translated to poetry

Posted 12 Years Ago



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