Friend Or Foe

When I was young, I was really stupid and I didn't like anyone.

 

If You're Really My Friend

 

Throughout Toward The End

 

Leave Me Alone And Go Pass By

 

Unless There's A Battle Cry

 

Once You've Become My Foe

 

You're Stepping On My Toes

 

Try Not To Get Too Tough

 

I, Too, Can Be Real Rough

 

Let's Get Ready To Rumble

 

Even When I'm Left In Crumble

 

I'll Get To Throw The Best Punch

 

A Knuckle Sandwich For Your Lunch

 

No Need For The Act On Rampage

 

Not Even The Value Of The Rage

 

As Long As The Fight's Fair

 

Afterward, We'll Be Square

 

At The End Of The Fight

 

I Got A Cigarette To Light

 

Author's Note

Yeah, I was one angry bastard who wouldn't take any bullshits.

Reviews

[Sarah]

This was a cute poem that captures the anger that children can feel towards others, and how you really only want your friends to leave you alone. XD I liked the line "I'll Get To Throw The Best Punch / A Knuckle Sandwich For Your Lunch" Very nice. (: My only issue was that a bit of the rhyme seemed forced and sounded awkward. =/ I guess that can work if you're writing it from a child's perspective, but it was a little distracting for me. Either way, good job with this! =)

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

most teenagers are. haha. ilike it.
reminds me alot of myself.

[Cylis Derrens]

Makes it harder to make friends, but I suppose we all have those moments. Anger can be a tricky b*****d at times.

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!!!!!! I loved the passion and anger in it.