I apologize

being bullied and disliked

Sorry if I found out,
I was oblivious at first,
You were calling me names,
And talk behind my back every time.

Sorry if I'm not a person likeable,
I can't change that fast,
And I don't want to change for you,
Because I feel unfair.

Sorry if I displease you,
I cannot be what you want me to be,
I didn't wish to know the truth,
Because I don't want to be hated.

I cry every night,
Wishing that everyone should just accept who I am,
I want to be accepted.

This simple wish,
I know it might not come true,
So, God please help me.

Author's Note

I am so-so right now, both optimist and pessimist(: Writing helps always

Reviews

[Drifter]

This poem makes me mourn for all those who have been bullied or hurt by all the pathetic people who think they are above everyone else. It's hard to be optimistic when the world is as filthy as it is.
They say keep your friends close and your enemies closer, but I don't agree with that. I'd say keep your values close and God closer.
Deep poem you have here.

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you for the review... that's right I can't agree with keep your enemies closer also... (:

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

First off, hello! Thank you for adding me as a friend! ^_^ I knew that Giotto could bring the world together. :)
Okay, on to the REAL review. Even just from the beginning, there is a soul signature of sadness. Like it hurts every time you remember it, a wound with no chance to heal. :( I hope this isn't about you personally, because it's far too upsetting to think of it that way... But if it is, just remember that no one can ever take away who you are if you don't let them.

[Rhianne Ney]

Hi... I found you somewhere while I was reviewing one's work..
This is written a year ago and I am partially healed from this... Since it came back... But I wont let others hurt me again I've to lean on something greater...
Thanks for the review (:

[zainul]

Great write.
The world belongs to those who can sincerely cry like you.
And you can cry:
"I cry every night,
Wishing that everyone should just accept who I am,
I want to be accepted."

[Rhianne Ney]

I literally cried and physically cry, if you get what I mean... I am the type of person who wants to be accepted.. Thanks Zainul (:

[zainul]

Thanks,Rhianne.

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome... thanks for your first review... I'm really glad to meet you

[zainul]

I am very happy to meet you here too.
I am so grateful to you that you reviewed many of my poems.

[Rhianne Ney]

I am waiting for reviews... so I just checked the news feed and reviewed anyone's work... since I'm free

[zainul]

That's very nice of you.
I do the same.

[Rhianne Ney]

(:

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Rhianne, You have enormous personal depth. You think about life, just don't be a victim of what others expect of you. Tred your own path you could be a really great poetess. I read your work and want to read more. There are only half a dozen poets I have discoverd thus far that have me entraped in their creativity-you 'child' are one.

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you... I wrote this a year ago since I'm a victim of those verbal bullies who can only speak on my back but who can't stand in front of me... (:
thanks for your review..

[Pax]

a sad poem, the sad way of reality is that we can't or its hard pleas everyone.
you be who you want to be, just be you and that's all that matters.

[Rhianne Ney]

you're right, thanks for the review (:

[.]

I cry every night,
Wishing that everyone should just accept who I am,
I want to be accepted.
Sad, but true
It sometimes happens to me when I come back from school
Great poem! 100/100 =)

[Rhianne Ney]

It always happens to teenagers like us... I hope it inspired you... *friendly smile*

[.]

Of course it did =)

[Rhianne Ney]

(: really love your avatar... It's like art is
flowing out of your head

[.]

Imagination and Creativity is my life tnx

[Rhianne Ney]

keep it up.. you're a young talent (:

[.]

tnx

[Jai Garg]

Your actual strength is with in you, just be confident of yourself and do what you think best; trusting in God.

Lol you are just learning things and it is great you can write down your feelings so well in a poem.
I am sure others are jealous of you; good luck as you face reality first hand as a kid.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thank you, I'll take your advice(:

[Irvette Dauphine]

like this poem..
reminds me to a test to in a special team, the senior is really bullied me DX
btw, this poem is great :)

[Rhianne Ney]

you're really good in net words ... sorry but can you tell me what btw means just wondering...

[Rhianne Ney]

anyway your new avatar is really cute (:

[Irvette Dauphine]

btw-by the way
thanks~ i like yours too :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Yeah... My avatar was close to who I am so I can't change it yet...

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for translating it to me...

[Irvette Dauphine]

it ok, no prob :)

[Patricia B. Hepler]

A basic need, besides food, water & shelter, is the need to be needed/wanted.
If those around you aren't accepting you as you are, you have choices...the possibilities can be endless! Your bio states you're 14. This is a very difficult time of each person's life, the steerage is so unclear. This too, will pass..
Remember to be true to yourself..
I truly enjoy your writing. Keep focus on what you like to do such as writing! Check out your local library-who knows, they just may have a writing club or similar programs for your age group. Good luck :)
Peace~ pat

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks (:

[Rhianne Ney]

I'll take a note at it

[The dark story]

it is a nice poem with a nice message.....i like the way you have written it.expressing your feelings of desperation in such an elegant way..some people fail to understand others and just want them to become like "them".it is really disgusting......i just ignore such peoples who can never understand me......i consider them as a hopeless case for me.....

[Rhianne Ney]

I wrote a poem related to this... the title is Carbon Copy

[Rhianne Ney]

And you're write those who can't endure wants to join them

[The dark story]

ohohoh.well i really don't mind joining in..if you think that a kid like me can probably be fit into it.oh and that writing of yours.i'll read it for sure,,,

[Rhianne Ney]

oh... thanks

[The dark story]

don't say thanks.....sorry......but can i ask you that for what are you saying it????????

[Rhianne Ney]

I just thanked you because you reviewed "carbon copy"

[The dark story]

ohoho..gotcha.no problem........hey.do you like anime??????

[Rhianne Ney]

yeah.. check on my bio I noted a few faves

[The dark story]

;( :( :( no Naruto.......

[Rhianne Ney]

I'm not an avid fan... I hope you wont hate me because of it... BUt i surely liked it when I was younger...

[The dark story]

what???? why on earth would i ever hate you just because you are not an anime fan......i only hate two people in my life:atheist and liars....please .don't say this line ever to me........

[Rhianne Ney]

uh.. sorry

[The dark story]

it's fine.no need for sorry

[Rhianne Ney]

(: