Friendship at stake

Friendship at stake

A Poem by RhythmOfTheRiver

"You cannot buy friendship"

I have tried my best, 
no naps and no rest,
yet I cant succeed,
which I really need.

Restless nights I spend,
With a huge mistake to mend,
But no matter ho hard I try, 
I can never fly.

The darkness of the night
seems to spread to the morning.
I feel like a helpless bird,
with two injured wings.

No one's helping me,
I am lonely
And however rich I am,
'you can't buy friendship with money'.

I just want my friends back, 
courage is what I lack,
to go and admit my mistake,
especially when my friendship is at stake

But I know
that I must do something,
For if I don't,
I won't be left with anything 

© 2017 RhythmOfTheRiver

Author's Note

If there is any mistake, please forgive me and notify me so that I can make the changes! =]

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Deep meaning and beautiful writing!!! Nicely done!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago

True..I liked the flow and rhythm of this poem. You cannot buy friendship with money that is true and that is why true friendship is like finding a treasure.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Very good and nice rhyming. Also very powerful meaning. Have very light flow even subject is not light at all.

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Added on July 12, 2017
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