Mockingbird (Nature's glory)

Chaiku … a Chinese influenced Japanese form (see tutorial in Author's Note). Inspired by Cherrie Palmer's poem "Chilled Wine Warm Kiss" http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Cherrie_Palmer/399760/

Mockingbird

Come sing your songs

lively and free …

each one its own

atop your tree.

You mesmerize

with no repeats;

miracles of

warbling treats.

You mimic pure

voices of all …

birds, insects -- each

wilderness call.

The mockingbird,

God’s lovely gift

to entertain …

our spirits lift.

Rejoice sweet bird

in endless song,

thrilling one’s soul

the whole day long.

Richard W. Jenkins

©2018

Author's Note

"CHAIKU"
A Chaiku is Chinese rhythm in Japanese reserve.
Rhyming is permitted, but is not required.
A verse is 4 lines of 4-syllables each,
no limit to the number of verses.
Topic matter about anything.

Photography: Copyright credits to Ron Dudley.

Well-intended critique and helpful comments are always welcomed. : )

Reviews

[Aura]

The last stanza:
Rejoice sweet bird
in endless song,
thrilling one’s soul
the whole day long. Sounds so enchanting. Bird tweets are the most peaceful sounds of nature, hearing them in the morning when I just wake up makes me feel good, its a sign of spring and summer because in fall and winter we don't hear them.

[Richard🖌]

So beautifully spoken, Aura Dear,

Your poetic voice sings ever-so brightly unto my heart's grateful ears.

Bless you and hug you with warmest thanks galore! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Aura]

You are most welcome!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Mockingbird'
Richard,
Within the lovely simple framework of four meter and four stanzas this Chaiku style ( I really appreciated your author's note by the way) is something that would be fun to do. I loved this ode to the wonderful Mockingbird and this poem has brought him to life and given him personality. so very fun to read.
'You mimic pure
voices of all...
birds, insects~~each
wilderness call.'
Thank you for writing things like this for I love God's creation so.
Blessings, to you dear writer friend.
Kathy

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Dear Lady Kathy 🤗

How wonderful the sensation of being loved, enjoyed, appreciated, and praised … as only You know how.
I, too, agree that the Mockingbird and Chaiku fit harmoniously together like song and soul.
The lines you've highlighted are my favorite, as-well; great minds and hearts think and feel so much alike.

With warmest hugs 'n happiest thanks! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Hey there Mr. Richard you are just so welcome. Hope your doing good and have some good plans for your life and summer.
Kathy

[Temperance]

Such a lovely poem celebrating the mockingbird. I love the rhyme and the flow of it. I bought your book, Richard and, am enjoying it immensely. I hope to learn more about poetry from it. Thank you for being here! Temp

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Temperance Dear🥀

You speak to my heart-of-hearts when praising the incomparably skilled Mockingbird, and the love of my most earnestly spieled poetry.
Oh, my gracious lady, how wonderfully blessed I am to know you've held the warm, soft feel my of humble book in your hands. No doubt your aim to learn from this comfy book will prove fruitful for you … there is much for a passionate poetess to gain and enjoy within its pages.

Thank you for buying my book and for your wonderful review … big hug! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Temperance]

Hugs back!

[Betty Hermelee]

What a lovely poem; the Mocking bird is so talented; not only does he have his own unique song but can mimic the songs of all birds...he is brave. strong and watches all from his perch atop a tree; indeed a graceful bird with power and "Joie de Vivre"
Well done Richard
Best, B

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Lady Betty ♫

OOooo, I love it when a lovely poetess speaks French to me … joy of life, indeed!
Such wondrously gracious things you say about the Mockingbird, too … it's as though he sings in your heart.

With hugs 'n blessings of warmest thanks! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Betty Hermelee]

I'm blushing! You're very welcome Richard!!!
Best, B

[William Michael Reeves]

You speak birdsong
with time to hear,
notes come along ...
dance in your ear.

To not repeat,
well, I must say,
that's quite a feat ...
do it all day.

When hypnotized
bugs, birds mocking
you, realized
our souls too, sing!

So if you wake
atop a tree,
for heaven's sake
climb carefully.

[Richard🖌]

A, somewhat, entertaining poem, Bill,

You should post in on your site, if you've not yet done so.

[William Michael Reeves]

'Somewhat' would be the operative word there. If I posted every little poem I write as a review I would have as many pages as Jacob. It's fun to find understanding in other's poetry by responding to it with a poem. Once in a while I post a collection of them and I'll throw this into one of those for a laugh.

[Richard🖌]

Each to their own.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Richard... you play a Poem like an Old Violin
with it tucked under your Chin.
The harmony of your voice and the Mockingbird's song
blends like Red Berries and Sunflower seeds on a
Summer's Eve. Be strong and fly with the Wind. gently, Pat

[Richard🖌]

Why thank you, Pat 🌸

For reading this humble Oriental piece, and for the gifted sentiments in the form of your own lovely poem.

Warmest wishes! ⁓ Richard ⛩

[Carola]

as always richard, lovely written portrayal of nature, love your brilliant choice of words!
cheerio carola

[Richard🖌]

And, Dear Carola, as always 🍂

You've brightened my day like a lovely song has drifted by, and left the sweetest sighhh*

Warmest thank you hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Carola]

hugs back. have a great easter weekend c.

[Miss Sharon]

(Rejoice sweet bird in endless song, thrilling one’s soul the whole day long.) Beautiful...as is the entire post! When I lived in Florida these beautiful birds entertained me many an hour. Thanks for an introduction to the Chaiku. I must try to write one soon. ~Sharon

[Richard🖌]

G'day, Miss Sharon 🌸

Ohhh-YES! There's nothing quit as entertaining as a mockingbird's seemingly endless array of songs. One day, I sat for over an hour with eyes closed in my easy chair and window open listening to a mockingbird sing the most amazing sounds, without a single repeat … sighhh*
I truly hope you'll give the Chaiku a chance … it's so lovely and easy a form to compose in.

Please, let me know if you do … hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌

[DIVYA]

This is such an endearing tribute to the Mockingbird. All in perfect meter and rhyme! A very interesting new form, I learnt today. Would love to try it some day. I am not an expert enough to critique this poem, only appreciate. A simple format such as this always interests me. Thanks for sharing, dear Richard 😊

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Divya 🍂

It is so nice to see you this fine day, to receive such enjoyably gratifying sentiments of my mockingbird poem, and to be left feeling warmed and appreciated by one of the site's premiere poetesses.
What a joy it would be to have the privilege of reading a Chaiku rendered by your eloquent pen. Please, let me know if/when you compose in this easy as a sunny morning form.

You are ever-so welcome, Divya … thank you for this gem of a review.
With happiest hugs to thee! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[DIVYA]

You're welcome, dear Richard. This is a delightful poem to read. Yes, I'd love to try out a Chaiku....Hopefully, very soon. It would be a pleasure and a privilege to have your guidance. 🙋‍♀️ Thanks again.

[Richard🖌]

A delight it will be, Divya, and you're sincerely welcome. 🙏🏼

[Unspoken poet]

This is every so lovely, loved the last two stanza's. This is really well written write

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Kay-T,

I thank you most humbly for your kind praises of this Nature piece, and that you loved something about it, too.

Many grateful blessings to You! ⁓ Richard 🍃