Hobnailed Caress

Fantasy may take you places...

Awakened

by kisses, vain

hobnailed caress

from raspberry rhythms-this gigolo dream           

with my fireflies abreast

these mauve tensions uncoiling

shorn clean of glib sanity

by performance so keen.

The demi-monde flight of defeats,                                               

tart slow dawning                       

predilection worn sparse

of digressions prime cream                      

despite copious deployment

of parfait admonitions

dirigueuer, dirigueuer

divine deoch an doris, dirigueuer    

 

Enticing like sun

brave encouragement done

then be beckoned to 

a purpling shroud                       

of a fantasy playing boldly loud

misled silken mulberry mindsight

craving faux summer’s resilient light

huddled deeply in indigo hindsight

wet

molten blankets of cemetery fright

dancing sepulchral ballet with the crowd

cozy droll mystery’s cloud

 

of brave mist blown over

the alleys back fence

a dark inkling, unwilling

harsh X-perience

conserve on fixations

in the

thick of the night

ply unflexible cravings

throw-a-bone, take a bite

starch crinolined fancy

scratched, stiff and resistive

to resort to a fantasy once

strangely used

intermittently bruised

in the grip of cold

substitute

misgivings glue.

 

The guilt-shod hooves of regretful long cast

down pale cobblestones sparking in

dark's narrow alley 

a harsh villainous clash, 

echoes creation, cruel mockery harrows

winds acrimonious, so

harsh, cold and erroneous

born midst dreams 

of those dark and felonious

on grey winds debris, where hope deftly flees

the freedoms flight gallop or

evils hooves hammering

bring restraint to its knees.

 

Hollow cold mists

breath the ghosts shadows, in

I say

down down down go I

to the

fantasies unrequit

belief in my own dull wit

borne of my blue lagoon

cloaked in blue déjà vu those

diurnal iniquities

foster internal density

that delight in the yelp of my

cognitive whelp as I

bask in the joy

of philosophies poi

with little else left to grasp, but the root!

 

Forgiveness there welters so

deep at the bottom, low

stairway to never

layed bare, yet layed clever so

opaquely shining

at the life there enshrining

in the bliss of entwining

at the spawn of divining

the first light of bloom

'neath ascendancies  moon

in first light of creations lagoon.

(deouch an doris= drink at the door)

 

Rikevi Rue Copywrite 2012

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Author's Note

all reviews welcome

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what stunning artwork of maze windings~ to me the feel is puzzle like~ a journey through experience injected through the fluid cadence of word mysteries~ unraveling layer by gorgeous layer~ a sweet bite from every corner from the succulent body of writing as art~

[Rikkevi Rue]

You always "get me" and have such an ability to sum up a write. Thanks you for revealing myself to me. You're reviews allow me to pirouette in the reflective light if critique!

[Rikkevi Rue]

that should read "light of critique"

[Poetic Justice]

divine! Loved the maze of lingistic tantalizingly tripping over each word! The colours and smells and tastes you created makes my mouth water! Truly a stunning piece.

[Rikkevi Rue]

thank you. I appreciate your views! The idea was to take a concept and thin "surf it" into previously uncharted (for me) creative waters. Just free form "let it flow" type stuff. It certainly makes an interesting contrast to stuctured writing next time you write in that genre!

[ghost writer]

this is like a kiss of enchantment as you weave a melody of words into a surreal pathway of bliss..Your meter is like a pythons back..smooth and dry..this is a masterful piece of writing..with some amazing visuals

[Mockingbird]

rich in imagery and metaphor. a dizzying journey through all of life's experiences and seeing everything beneath the surface. excellent diction and rhyme. snippets of phrases will be etched in my mind.

[Rikkevi Rue]

thank you so much. I love your validative perspective of my effort! Very kind