impeccable talent meets genius music swells and bursts and cuts through the stagnant air the moment is no longer dull creativity spikes beauty radiates through golden sound surrounds music becomes my embrace
We are all waiting for the moment you break the silence with all of your flawless potential
beautiful embrace of music~ how much I do understand this~ music is a constant in my environment~ from the moment I wake up until I fall asleep~ there is always some form of music pouring harmony into the day~
I like the first stanza very much. The other two, not so much. I would cut them out, leave just the first one - really captures that moment when the conductor's baton is in the air, poised to drop. I dig.
So much unfulfilled potential in all of us awaiting a spark to set it ablaze and shower the world. By the looks of it, you are talking about a musician which makes it so much more important in my opinion. We crave beautiful music, as music is food for the soul.
The form you chose suits the poem very well.
Nicely done.
Clever idea. I enjoyed the unusual structure you employed in this poem.
Although I never like the word 'flawless' itself. If you call something flawless, then it means you don't know enough about the subject to judge it accurately.
I particularly liked the phrase 'golden sound'. Nice write :D
Thank you for sharing this piece. Short, sweet, and complete. Almost sounds like the words are speaking directly to the readers. Was it constructed for this effect?
I love music.
I love writing.
I love cats.
I love my family.
I love my friends.
I love foreign films.
I love Europe.
***I write to capture a moment or feeling.***
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