Fallquinox

A haiku about the change to Fall

...

A slight hint of Fall...

Leaves turning orange and yellow,

yet, green still abounds...

...

Rod Hatter

Sept. 29, 2023

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Rod ⛩

I've read a number of your poems, each quite nicely rendered … I appreciate your sharings.
Coincidentally, I was just yesterday teaching this form and is, probably, why it chose me to review it.
Because of their unique challenge of brevity in conveying imagery and meaningful impact, Haiku and Senryu are among my favorite forms to express creative impact … for, they require no small amount of skill in doing so.
Utilizing the wonders of Nature, her colors, hues, and textures, your Haiku is certainly an exemplary example of all those detailed attributes, and more … breathing life into the reader's imaginative and appreciative mind's-eye, ever-so deftly.

Even so, Rod, feel free to contact me about a number of issues here that may be considered, if you might wish to conform to this form's strict details.

This is an excellent and enjoyable effort you've offered us, your appreciative readers.
Thank you, Sir! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Arundass TP]

Interesting poem. Short and sharp. Good work 👍