Sunny ah Wonderstand

Sunny ah Wonderstand

A Story by Rodrick Franklin McLaren
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on a Magical Mystery Tour, her dream, an new shoes

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frame this, A wonder like Oz Dorthy. Curly blond locks. An pearls.Oh and those
sparkley red magic shoes. Right in fashion. Bellow rolled up blue jeans, an baggy
Lovers shirt and.... A yellow brick road arrive Mysterious. In Wonderstand Texas....
Follow the stars, on this here
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Ode Sunny ah Wonderstand
: Episode 1 Sunny gets her dream, an new shoes
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Giglgle a little, to dream this theme.... as movie un-winds
in: Wonderstand
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more just the point baby. just shuffle, the deck. mmm... oh ya
we'll neck. right out there on the lawn, where i giggle
you bet, right there if you please. win the prize
my longer breath, under Texas heat. beat bugs an dine

love is wonder, love sucks at times. when see. 'boink'
an elbow in my eye. re-shuffle stupid, that ain't doin it. Awe
don cry. I was foolin around, on this sunny day. dreamin.
your probably sleeping, off the latest round... i blush :0 man


so princess prettily. the naughtiness i be steaming and brush
my teeth with lavender, wear lace. Buddy boy, ca ca
could REALLY drool. This dream. fer sure, messing...with
my-Texas pride ;D da da d ah d ah dum didy - day
-diddy - day.

Hey think I'll go outside, sure seems like a day. Worth sinigin
What heck walk an skip some too, maybe baby. Dream up, some beat
for you. To rock around, this heat. Hey there, big orb. In the sky. Mmm nice.
That's, the way. Good - day - sun -shine - i - took- ah - walk da da da da, just - the
- other - day... good - day - shine. How ya doin sun, nice ta see ya.
Got some bubble gum, to be ah chewin. Ta be snapping bubbles, an fingers.
Wrigglin my toes. to the beat ah yr rays. Good - day - shine - da duh a da do do. Day


I'm so happy i could spit, an think i might. right there. right on that bug oops :(sorry
Lady Bug. But i gotta be strollin. Good - day - sun - shine da da da da da---- d, wha, the heck -----tweety sweetie, who are you?
(I'm a little birdy - that told you so)
so, what did you tell me?
(well great song, but leave my bus alone! who wants to dine on a bug. all goobered)
well, alright. anything else - tweety bird.
( a pause man - i shouldn't tell her. an wreck, the surprise)
jeepers creepers, bird. tell me all, see... or, blow the breeze. Please!


(no never mind, keep strollin and i'll follow along - i like your singing)
alright, skip - diddy do da - skip - through - the - way. My - oh - my... what - a - wonderful - day! Wonderful - feelings - comin - my - way. skip-didy?---- wha - the......? Jeeeepers peepers, man alive. Where'd ya get them eyes. I do believe. Just snap these ragged runners. three times.
'swish 'swish 'swish'...
that'll do er. Go Girly...
go go  get ah kiss

(told ya. that's what little birdies. do)

Woweeeeee . Oh man. come ere Geen Eyes, an give Baby a Kiss. An hey, sugar plum. lottsa tongue. "ya beautiful, like that. What ah day"...
wanna stroll.
I know, the perfect knoll!. Not far away. Race ya...

He stood an stare, nay not a word. to pull outta no where it seem. 
Hold out to stunned Sunny
A pair of Bright red shoes... that sparkle glitter an gleam...
like diamonds sparked under
that Texas sky....
Oh my

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Aww Continued. Oh why, oh why?

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© 2010 Rodrick Franklin McLaren


Author's Note

Rodrick Franklin McLaren
Still a gaming work in progress
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haha, it's so bright and happy and bubbly! it makes me want to go out and buy some sparkly red shoes of my own and where them in the texas sun ;) this was definitely a great way to start my day, because it got me grinning :D ... and i like your desktop too, it's very *you*

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... this is like a very complex but happy and merry song ... it's so alive and so vibrant ... i didn't follow all the parts precisely ... but i did catch the infectious mood ... and it's very enchanting and joyous ... you have great skill with words ... and it is extremely enriching to read your writes ... the images you pain are absolutely stunning ... and you do have quite a quaint desktop ...

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haha, it's so bright and happy and bubbly! it makes me want to go out and buy some sparkly red shoes of my own and where them in the texas sun ;) this was definitely a great way to start my day, because it got me grinning :D ... and i like your desktop too, it's very *you*

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I liked this and was waiting for more actually. A visual you gave to the readers.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is..AWESOME:D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I.....want....whatever your having..... :D
This has to be the most entertaning story
i have ever read. no lie. makes me want some pie.
da da la dum dee doo. love it. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Astounding (:

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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