Sara's Song

A Beautiful Stranger Sang Souls Serenity

Souls Surrender











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I sat upon a moonlight ripple
that glide
refractions along
its very edge
the maiden supple recovered
the star
that dance her finger tip
sung sweetly
the light of her lyric wet
falling crescendo
into endless thrall an sail
ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song

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Sang to Moonlight & Wave Searching
Spirit Themes...

Author's Note

her inspiration was divine

Reviews

[Augustus]

Magical, mystical write...It transported me from this world into one where fancy reigns supreme... Very very elegantly penned indeed! The beginning is so wonderfully mesmerizing! "I sat upon a moonlight ripple".... Wow! You weave magic through words...
"ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song"
....Astonishingly brilliant...fantastic flow...like a flowing river, like a melodious song...
Enchanting write!

[Sarusai Hiryu]

You write with a sweetness and elegance that is most captivating.

[Lilly Negoi]

quite mermaid-ish...so to speak :)...

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what a beautiful image you create ..magical..

[Stacey]

This write is so beautiful and tender. I find it almost a lullaby to a beautiful woman adored my a man that holds her so dear. How lovely and wonderful!

[Tate Morgan]

Thats the song of love for sure

[Phibby Venable]

i love Sara's song (and the photograph) because of the dream like
feel that is conveyed so well. Very fine.

[Marie Harrison]

Beautiful poem.

[Zeek4]

A very beautiful and visual poem. Thanks

[Alice_In_WhateverLand]

this was a very magical read indeed :) I got goosebumps as the imagery played out in my mind :) :)

[HorrorMaster]

Very magical

Amazing write