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Sara's Song

Sara's Song

A Poem by Rory CJ Frankson
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A Beautiful Stranger Sang Souls Serenity

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Souls Surrender











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I
sat upon a moonlight ripple
that glide
refractions along
its very edge
the maiden supple recovered
the star
that dance her finger tip
sung sweetly
the light of her lyric wet
falling crescendo
into endless thrall an sail
ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song
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***  Sara ***


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Standing in the Waves


The Moon

Molds to Her Wonder
Her Form
Loveliness in True Knowing
... Her Feel of Loneliness ...

Real & Sang
Moonlight & Wave
Searching
... Spirit Themes ...

Shyly

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© 2010 Rory CJ Frankson


Author's Note

Rory CJ Frankson

Divinity assembles Beauty never seen... in. The Shy!



Featured Review

Magical, mystical write...It transported me from this world into one where fancy reigns supreme... Very very elegantly penned indeed! The beginning is so wonderfully mesmerizing! "I sat upon a moonlight ripple".... Wow! You weave magic through words...
"ethereal tenderness
billowing dress
her caress the dimmer shimmer
I shiver
an evening ends
mooning
lonely
only
dreaming sweet Sara's Song"
....Astonishingly brilliant...fantastic flow...like a flowing river, like a melodious song...
Enchanting write!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very nice - wuite Divine. Reminds me of both a mermaid and a siren. Nicely spun. Great choice of music too!
Love and Light,
SiddARTha


This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"... and God saw that it was not good for man to be alone."
It's enough to make believers out of us. Believers in Sarah, that is.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its simply beautiful, almost magical


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is wonderful, so beuatiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rory CJ Frankson

Vernon, British Colombia, Canada



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