quote/poem

"There's something 'bout love that breaks your heart Whoa oh oh oh, it sets you free There's something 'bout love that tears you up Whoa oh oh oh, you still believe" -D.A.

Each day, when the sun rises no words can compare. Each night, a message shines in starts as the moon helps guide their way. Forever dreaming of this moment. Never thought it would be real for me. The more time goes on, this feeling grows strong. My heart writes a song with out even trying. You are the inspiration that create the words within my soul. You're the reason that my story was for, dreaming of a chance. Forever enchanted everyday and ever after. 

Author's Note

Here is a romantic little peace I hope you all enjoy!! Love is the most precious gift anyone can be bestowed. I have the blessing of loving my family, friends, faith, and passions in life. I try and take none for granted. I pray one day that I will find "my kind of perfect" and to be known he does not have to be "perfect." He just has to be perfect to me. Love and be love and know that you should never just fall with fear but just trust with faith. One day (if you already haven't) you will trust and just let go without even realizing it and it won't even feel like falling but flying. Thank you guys so much for reading and I hope you all know how much I appreciate you xoxo

"Never look back. If Cinderella went back to get her shoe, she would have never been a princess" -Unknown

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

I think the "running" nature of this poem amplifies the wistful feeling of love. many would criticize and say it needs punctuation and separation. I don't think so. I think this poem works because of the running thoughts it provides. It was very well done and I wanted to point out its strength. I also love the elation that you bring to it. Great job!

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you!! I tend to write the same way I talk and so sometimes it translates and sometimes it doesn't haha but I am happy you like it!! I wanted to write it the same way someone would feel. Your mind and heart tend to go faster then we can really understand sometimes lol But thank you thank you!!! :D

[Eddie Phillips]

You did a fine job..I loved it

[Sasha]

Beautiful .. !

"Your the reason that my story was for, dreaming of a chance. Forever enchanted everyday and ever after" .

Amazing !

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you soooo much!! :D

[icelandicblue]

This is really lovely and very heartfelt. I love the quote you've included as well.

[Rosaria_V]

Thanks you so much! Xoxo