Losing You

This is what I feel about one of my friends, even though I know now I'm not losing her.

I am so confused

I just don't know what to do

First she's got a girlfriend,

Now she's got a boyfriend,

I just feel like I'm losing you

Losing you.

You know my feelings for you,

which the are so true

I just wish I knew

If it was true, that I'm losing you

I feel like I'm losing you.

I'm happy for you

That much is true

I just wish it didn't feel like I was

Losing you.

Author's Note

This is just a random poem I wanted one of my friends to see, but she said it was so cute that I should post it. >///<

Reviews

[Zombie Waffle]

Constructive notes:
Instead of 'gf' or 'bf' write it in full - it makes it much more meaningful.
And 'so losing you' makes almost no sense at all - try to reword it.

While I think I know what you're talking about, try to use punctuation - it helps when you write in actual English.

=)

[Rose]

Thanks, I'll change those parts into full words, and I will try get the other part fitting in right. And if it is okay for me to ask, what do you think I'm trying to talk about here, because I don't want to try have people get the wrong idea of what the poem is supposed to mean.

[Zombie Waffle]

It sounds like you're jealous of your friend.
That's about as deep an understanding as I can gather from this.

[Rose]

Not jealous of my friend... Although, I guess you could say that is kind of the reason, but not in the way you think. I guess there is something more that I feel between the two of us... *sigh*

[Zombie Waffle]

Well, what matters is what comes out through your poetry.

[Rose]

True.

[Black Rose]

Really nice and emotional,I loved it!

[Rose]

Thank you. Hehe

[Perri]

Very sad and emotional, can tell you have strong feelings here...hopefully you're not going to have to ever lose her though =)

[Rose]

I hope I won't at least lose her as a friend, but I've lost my chance to be with her, that's what I get for keeping secrets for so long, especially that one.

[Perri]

Aww..sadface ='(

[Rose]

Ya. *Sigh*