Only in the rain

Only in the rain

A Poem by Rossen
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bouncing droplets of...

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                                                       she
                                             
                                            never kisses
                                        me without a dew
                                      she gives me pleasure
                                               In the oddest way
                                                      like her hair flip 
                                                              turning away
                                        we kiss so passionately...
                           only in the rain
                         no love for me,
                        dry is my bane
                       playful kissing, 
                       fostered by the lightest mist...
                                                       if sprinkles should dot her lips                                                                           
                                                   I taste her magic,so truly missed
                                           only pouring rain can release our pain
                                                   crashing thunder from far away
                                               more time to love her in this day
                            the wetter she is...
                              the deeper we kiss
                                 she kisses me insane
                                      never in sunshine
                                               only in the rain 
                                                                      
                                                                                               

© 2014 Rossen


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I'm amazed! really amazed! when I first opened this poem my eyes where like "WOW" to see Your big beautiful drop, then as I started reading, I was again really amazed by the words and how perfectly, thoughtfully, meaningfully, profoundly, enchantingly... mystically filling that drop!

That's true creativity! Thank You for such treat!

Posted 3 Years Ago


A very lovely poem, mysterious and romantic.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Steamy Passionate nicely done.


I love the rain it can be very romantic.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.




blessings. kindred poet

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very interesting, that it is only in the rain...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very steamy. I loved the way this was layed out

Posted 7 Years Ago


Soft and sensual, your words float across the page almost as if a raindrop is falling...
beautiful writing my friend. Going in my library!

:) Julie

Posted 7 Years Ago


What a singularly beautiful write. This is as exqusitly coloured as one of your raindrops caught in the light.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow so beautiful and powerful. I love how you captured the whole essence of the poem with the words, ''never in sunshine
only in the rain''
Very brilliant Rossen!!


Posted 7 Years Ago


Is this a metaphor for the poetic muse? When it rains, it pours, and she showers you with her affections. When it's dry, she's cold and withdrawn? Just wondering....a wonderful, whimsical, love-lorn write. Thank you, Rossen. I love this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Rossen

Sebastopol, CA



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