UNSEEING HEART

UNSEEING HEART

A Poem by SHEEMA HUQ
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If only life were as simple

 as ‘a walk in the park’,

when addressing matters

 of one’s sullen heart,

traipsing, while thinking,

tempered by the humid

scent of Birch bark, in

itinerant idleness,

unsheathing the

unwrought residue of

vehement pontificating,

eyes are swollen, heavy,

they weep and twitch

with the strong  gust,

eyes feel worn and weary,

they squint at the very

thought of  ‘must...of must, must’

eyes become awakened

when the mind soothes

the unseeing  heart

with  reassurances  to  trust

 

 

© 2013 SHEEMA HUQ


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The way life is we all go through trials and tribulations... and sometimes those very wisp sent our way are a test, to get us to another level on life, cause perhaps we will need to strengthen in some areas that are necessary for us to better ourselves... the important fact to always take to mind and heart is that life is filled with surprises, and unorthodox unpredictability .... however just as theres seasons in weather there are seasons in our lives.. and sometimes we shut down due to a particular event occurring in our lives... but as long as theres that faith.. inside the heart and glint of light when happiness is yet a whisper away... u summed it up perfectly

"eyes become awakened

when the mind soothes

the unseeing heart

with reassurances to trust"

another incredible write... much kudos to you



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

"however just as theres seasons in weather there are seasons in our lives.. and sometimes we shut do.. read more



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thoughts and moods do change with the winds that blow against us with the harshness of life.
no life is no walk in the park...but then parts of it can be...and there is beauty and serenity to be seen and had....guess we wouldn't appreciate the walks as much without the bad stuff happening also...there are those rainy days when we stay inside ourselves.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

thank you so much for stopping by and commenting
This one went into my faves dear poetess. I think you have done a marvelous job here...Pen on...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

Thank you sooooo much, SAMI
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure ...Any time...:)
soothing..........excellent write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

Thank you , lovely to befriend you, and for your precious time Neva
Do thoughts often magnify themselves on everyday walks in the park? It sure seems like it, and I take your poetry as a sort of reference to destiny. How nothing is a coincidence, but is fate itself speaking in tongues.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

Yes dude, kind of, I was writing in terms of moving on and enabeling change, , which aint always str.. read more
SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

would help if I wasn't bad typist
I love how you bring your thoughts to life. Alas, I being me feel life is as simple as a walk in the park. I also look to nature to answer the most bewildering of questions. lol, thats just who I am. You are a wonderful writer.

"the mind soothes

the unseeing heart

with reassurances to trust"

Just wonderful!



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

Melody, I am so grateful for your time, thanks for such praise, and the day to day events /relation.. read more
This seems like a constant battle of decision-making on love to me... and again I love the way you use such descriptive words. Great piece (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

actually on relationships and balance in general, just reflections on busy, bussling earlier ons, th.. read more

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SHEEMA HUQ
SHEEMA HUQ

LONDON , ENGLAND, United Kingdom



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