GIRL AND THE PATENT LEATHER SHOES

GIRL AND THE PATENT LEATHER SHOES

A young girl was looking in a shoe store

She saw the most beautiful patent leather shoes

Her eyes caught the beautiful shoes

But she found she could not afford them

She was sad

And started to walk out of the store

When an older lady walked in

As she was watching from outside

She bought the patent leather shoes

For the girl

The girl was so very happy 

Because she was invited to a party

Now she can go and feel she belongs

With her new shiny patent leather shoes

Allen Hollandsworth

"8/14/11

Reviews

[Katy Knight]

It's nice =) It's got a cute story to it

[Shep]

Love the story poem.

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Nice story. I love a happy ending.

[KAREN]

Very nice! What little girl wouldn't enjoy new shoes?
Big Sis

[Helen Woodward]

I think as little girls, patent leather shoes brought many smiles to faces and joy to feet...
Enjoyed :-)

Blesssssssssssssssss

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Simplicity and cute beauty and innocent views of a little blue eyes...Very Nice.

[midnight star]

I like this cute little poem!

[LadyKarissa]

Great poem Allen, but you misspelled brought, no I am not a grammarnazi you know me to well for that. This is great. Lucie

[Larry Dyson]

very nice..