Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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CHOCOLATE AND TOFFEES

CHOCOLATE AND TOFFEES

A Chapter by STAR CHILD

Ever so rich
Creamy chocolate
A box of chocolate covered toffees please
Oh so very divine
Such a sweet surprise

















Allen Hollandsworth
�"4/19/11


© 2011 STAR CHILD


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This is very good Allen. It is rather short. Isn't there any more you could have said about Chocolates and toffee. I am sure there was. I can't see that this is a story. It is more like a poem. Lucie

Posted 12 Years Ago


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