Irish Enabler

A Tanka poem composed for the Nothing Like a First Kiss contest

Forbidden soft lips
Parting slightly with a breath
Sunlight streaming in
Pulling in close, silken mouths
Sitting close, addiction born
 

Reviews

[Loner]

This amazing! It's so simple visual. Absolutely beautiful. I'm glad you found it.

[Magicant]

Very exact.
You made it like a drug! Oh, and I liked the title too.

[ST]

WONDERFUL!

I love it sab, I have already told you, but let me say it again
I get it and I love it!

(& I submitted)

[Ethan Leon]

I like it, but I didn't feel as inspired as last time I read your work. OH well. Still good.

[Ivory]

Wonderful and true to form.
Thank you for your submission into my contest, Good luck : )

[V. K. Harris]

Very Beautiful, I love it.