MEELAN

Meelan is an Indian name. It is derived from a Sanskrit expression meaning "coming together".

MEELAN

A walk in the evening, you and I

Sitting at the bench of beach

Seeing the sun, going down into the sea

As flowing water touching our feet.

 

Setting sun making shadow on the water

Sands reflect its flash and sparks

Tints pranks on her cheeks and shimmer

Soft breeze of west making her slacks.

 

Her hair dancing with air

She tries to put it under left ear

But spate of flow vagaries her heart

Then she turns toward me and whisper ­"

 

LOOK AT "MEELAN" OF EARTH AND SUN

BETWEEN THEM, THERE IS NONE, NO ONE.

Author's Note

Meelan is also a name used in Romance- speaking Europe owing to its Ancient Roman meaning of "eager and laborious".

Reviews

[Sindu]

wow! So delicate and your words are refreshing. You paint a vivid picture worth experiencing :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for this refreshing comment.

[Sindu]

Am glad to.

[Afraa]

I love a good poem that puts beautiful images in the head and this one has it!!!

Amazing piece indeed.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend for all your words.....

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very nice read, I like its expression and flow, you have done a great job :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear pal.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is great. I have learned something from this piece. Sweet and romantic. I love to have a "date in a beach".

[Saddam]

Really that will be very romantic... Thanks for read dear.

[Skai Rain]

Beautifully written piece. Bravo.

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend....

[Saddam]

very nice and moving descriptions.

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend...

[Prabha Salimath]

Vivid description of sea amd earth as lovers very beautiful I reallt liked it...

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.....

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[Oyindamola Shoola]

Very descriptive and a well penned piece

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Very interesting scene inspired as I read it.
Thanks for sharing it.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for reading.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome! :)

[costa siwale]

you really have a way with words, your descriptions are simple but powerful. i enjoyed reading this piece

[Saddam]

thanks dear friend.... i am so happy to see you such a long time..... thank you very much.