MEELAN

Meelan is an Indian name. It is derived from a Sanskrit expression meaning "coming together".

MEELAN

A walk in the evening, you and I

Sitting at the bench of beach

Seeing the sun, going down into the sea

As flowing water touching our feet.

 

Setting sun making shadow on the water

Sands reflect its flash and sparks

Tints pranks on her cheeks and shimmer

Soft breeze of west making her slacks.

 

Her hair dancing with air

She tries to put it under left ear

But spate of flow vagaries her heart

Then she turns toward me and whisper ­"

 

LOOK AT "MEELAN" OF EARTH AND SUN

BETWEEN THEM, THERE IS NONE, NO ONE.

Author's Note

Meelan is also a name used in Romance- speaking Europe owing to its Ancient Roman meaning of "eager and laborious".

Reviews

[Eve Ola]

such a beautiful poem and the scene with scenery .. I really enjoyed

[Namrata]

Nice one. :D I like the way you use "meelan" here.

[Matching Socks]

Very sweet and lovely write dear SSADD.
Very much enjoyed this.

[Anne Timmins]

You engaged this reader right from the start, and kept me riveted to the very end.

[Naina]

Its really a very beautiful creation.. I really like it.. I think its a perfect description of the word "MEELAN".. very nice work.. keep it up..:)

[just Penny]

That's such a neat name for "romance" and you have written a delightful poem here with loving sentiments that are quite touching. Nicely done. Penny

[Ashira Macy]

How lovely. The poem doesn't talk much about the relationship between you and her, but through your words and descriptions it is clear that you care for one another very deeply. Great imagery!

[Frieda P]

Sweet and tender milieu that whispers so gently in your poetry, exactly what is the translation for Meelan? Muchly enjoyed.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I really enjoyed this write. It has a different kind of appeal and flows very well. Thank you for sharing it. I like the title also

[kublakhan27]

A beautifully quaint and lush piece that transports the reader to this beach with its vivid and peaceful elemental imagery...nicely done :)