MEELAN

Meelan is an Indian name. It is derived from a Sanskrit expression meaning "coming together".

MEELAN

A walk in the evening, you and I

Sitting at the bench of beach

Seeing the sun, going down into the sea

As flowing water touching our feet.

 

Setting sun making shadow on the water

Sands reflect its flash and sparks

Tints pranks on her cheeks and shimmer

Soft breeze of west making her slacks.

 

Her hair dancing with air

She tries to put it under left ear

But spate of flow vagaries her heart

Then she turns toward me and whisper ­"

 

LOOK AT "MEELAN" OF EARTH AND SUN

BETWEEN THEM, THERE IS NONE, NO ONE.

Author's Note

Meelan is also a name used in Romance- speaking Europe owing to its Ancient Roman meaning of "eager and laborious".

Reviews

[Surya pradha]

has a nice flow to it. nice poem, Saddam.

[Kamari's]

Sadr you know I have a softer spot for imagery so this is among my favorites of your writing well done

[Saddam]

great...great thanks to you dear..... you are boosting my imagination.

[Kamari's]

Anytime my friend just call upon me when you wish

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful and romantic seems very new.


Nice work Nicely Penned.

Thank you for sharing.

Blessings. Benita

[Ruth]

How romantically beautiful! Made my heart flutter! xo

[Daydreamer]

This was a truly majestic piece. Well done.

[Niloufer Sultan]

Just Wow! A beautiful visual created by words!

[Stefanie Holmes]

This was a beautiful piece SSADD! :)

~Stefanie

[Mary Steffen]

I thought this poem is very well written and creative. It took me there!
Keep up the good work and keep writing

[John Anderson]

Your words are so beautifully expressed and powerfully delivered. I really love this one

[ThatWriterGirl]

This is so beautiful. It really evokes emotion in the reader.