DAS - Man Of Courage Or a Coward

DAS_ MAN OF COURAGE OR A COWARD

A story about a man who has lost his all stirrings for his coward but a man with all time looser can do any action of dare? Perhaps.......

Anyone or no one can be always daring

You know, manhood always followed by cowardice,

You fear, but have not actually courage to accept it

Courage and cowardliness are two face of a dice.

 

This man, Das, a master of a giant and robust body

Nobody can impose him a fearful, timid skeletal,

But he was very squeaky and effeminate type

Even a mew can make him peculiar and pitiable.

 

He was such a lull that he did not care his ill wife

She died one day, but debase man not even saw her face,

Even a day, when his only son was crushed by speedy car

He was unable to lift his little finger to save his the dear race.

 

But one dusky evening, near the railway line

A fainted woman and her child were in the line of running train,

Das, a looser of all time, suddenly run for save them

That all was matter of seconds he saved both life but lost own.

 

Everyone were in shocking state

Some were saying �" “What a courageous man!”

The haunted look was disappeared from his face

He said last �" “I go to my Maker with a clean slate.”

This is originally a story written by R. Venugopal Reddy.

Reviews

[Lyndy]

Nice poem! I like it very much! :)

[Skai Rain]

Such a great write. So sad. I am unsure if "looser" was supposed to be "loser"?
Either way, great work.

[Ruth]

Interesting piece...salvation...redemption...process of realising...powerful xo

[For Who I Am]

Great Job! It expressed the true sides of man

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear........

[Mila]

Very nice. I liked the way it flowed and the wording was great. Really enjoyed this one!

-Mila

[Saddam]

Thank You very much dear friend.....

[Prabha Salimath]

SSAD it is really opens a vivid imagination of Das. It looks Das was an irresponsible person who gets his good lesson after loosing everything sad and pathetic, but his deeds compensated by his herioc work liked it.....

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend... You understand well. I like this story so I made id in poetry form. Thanks a lot dear.

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome...
Poetry is means to scrutinize the thing clearly.....

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautifully written, I loved reading this piece. :-)

Kaze~

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend..... You are very kind

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, anytime my friend. :-)

[forevermore1218]

beautifully written love :)

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear friend.

[MomzillaNC]

Is this a translation to English? I found the concepts interesting but presented rather disjointedly, as if it's been translated by one of those auto-translators.

[Saddam]

This is not any translation, But I have done it. So there is any error please drag my eyes.... I will be happy. Thanks you very much for your read. Please mention that error.

[Sami Khalil]

Even in sadness, you write beautifully sir. Bravo....................

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear Sir. You always increase my hope.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......