Another End

Another End

A Poem by Maan

Every night it seems to be another end, but in real that's just other dream.

Facing again
the beginning of my ending
lost everything
except this loneliness
and these wounds
yet not alone
I had the chance
I failed to realize
my senses are gone
breathing purposeless
fighting for unknown reason
with unknown enemy
that doesn’t even exist
that doesn’t fight back
yet these scars I’m getting
still alive
still inside
losing every piece of me
yet seeking a hand
yet to figure out
am I dead or still alive?
screaming in the dark
woke up with blood on my hands
hard to tell what I did
getting uneasy to breathe
I fell on the ground
teary eyes
soothing pain
awful smile
I see heaven burning
a satisfying end
but yet to realize
Is this the end?
as this was the beginning
I remember
a meaningless sigh
another glimpse of the end
yet to come
another end

© 2012 Maan

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"screaming in the dark
woke up with blood on my hands"
These two lines are just amazing. The whole poem is a stunner, but those two lines stood out for me.
It's another quite emotional piece and I really enjoyed reading it... which probably makes me a little bit sick. :) The ebb and flow of the piece is magical too.
Keep up the hard work!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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moody with deep dark feelings throughout.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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an emotional dark tale. as they said intriguing

Posted 11 Years Ago

Poignant dark write, striking.

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was a very raw and emotional piece. It had my attention the whole time. It read like a story, though the wording was choppy so it still resinated as a poem. It was really good. I got good images, it was a great read.

Posted 11 Years Ago

a very interesting poem to read, sorta Gothic tones , had me captivated all the way through like a good story! Thank-you for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on June 6, 2012
Last Updated on July 18, 2012
Tags: dream, night, another, end.



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