Dream your Dream

Dream your Dream

A Poem by Rinzin Samdup

On the run,
don't look back, 
can't waste a loop of time,
when its reaching the finishing line.

Never concede,
fight till you get weary,
losing doesn't matter,
We're in the battle field,
Where braveness of which you could be proud.

Roads may seem to be far,
keep going until, you cross the bar,
hurdles may be on your Odyssey,
perdurable, like a calm sea.

On the other side,
that's where your dream lies.
Wear a smile , no matter,
patience, persistence, for you to win
to win the race of living.

Keep fighting, 
until the battle ends,
the never ending road , 
holding onto the dream you dream. 

© 2015 Rinzin Samdup


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our time is now, yes right now - how should we choose to spend it ... a great poem and reminder to live beyond our dreams X

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rinzin Samdup

8 Years Ago

appreciate for the read.
the final word is never give up. Life is what you make of it. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rinzin Samdup

8 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time and reviewing it . Hell yeah! NEVER GIVE UP! :)
Reading this made me feel calm within myself, like it (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rinzin Samdup

8 Years Ago

I am glad it you liked it. :) thank you for the read.
I agree w ith you on this write. If we do not step out to really live the dream we have for our lives...who will? Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rinzin Samdup

8 Years Ago

thank you for agreeing and yes i agree with you too. :) thank you

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Rinzin Samdup
Rinzin Samdup

Thimphu, Thimphu, Bhutan



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I'm From Bhutan. Love music, traveling, nature,photography, meeting people, animals, Philosophy, writing and most of all , being Me. my motto- Love and spread love more..

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