Prayer of Love

Prayer of Love - A spiritual culmination of universal Love.

I saw you in my dream

Naked in the sea of Hypocrites

On the beach of loneliness crowded

with the bodies, who dwell in unconsciousness

I found my divinity as i came close to you

The sound of eternity begin to form a prayer culminating into an

unlimited grace of god, which filled your arms as I embraced you.

The sea was clam and the limited sky began to reduce

itself into the shine in your eyes.

I was lost to find myself I was in you and you in me.

Author's Note

Reviews are welcome

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nothing like being lost in another person...that kind of love is rare...but it is a good place to get lost.

nicely expressed.

jacob

[Sameer]

Thanks Mai for your kind appreciation

[Mai L Nissen]

I liked reading it :) "I was lost to find myself I was in you and you in me." A lovely ending for the poem.
My favourite bit is these lines: "On the beach of loneliness crowded/
with the bodies, who dwell in unconsciousness" - Beautifully phrased!

[Sameer]

Thanks a lot James for appreciating it.

[Jamestown]

Absolutely fantastic piece of work! This going to my favorites!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!