Fate Meeting

Alex and Anthony Meet for the first time.

            Walking out of Starbucks Alex Shade studies his biology notes while trying to keep his mind off Chance; his now ex-boyfriend. At the same time Anthony Day is walking into the coffee shop, having just finished moving into his apartment.
Neither is paying attention and end up colliding with one another. Papers go flying.

            “Oh man! I am so sorry. I totally was not paying attention,” apologizes Anthony. Backing up slightly he glances at the guy he just ran into. Long black bangs cover on eye. The visible eye is blue and artfully outlined by black liner. The blue-eyed cutie is only slightly shorter than six-foot Anthony himself. Leaning down Anthony helps the cutie pick up his papers.

“No no, it’s okay. I shouldn’t have been reading...”replies Alex trailing off as he glances up at Anthony. Whoa, Alex thinks, He’s hot! Strands of long black hair fall across the hunk’s face, covering one of his amazingly beautiful green eyes. Eyes gorgeously defined by thick black lashes. Unlike Alex, the hunk is not wearing guy liner.

Staring into each other’s eyes they reach for the last paper. Their hands brush against one another’s, snapping them both back to reality.

            “Well, again, sorry I bumped into you,” Anthony apologizes once again.

            “It’s alright,” replies Alex, standing up and shoving his notes into his back-pack.

            “Guess I’d better be going,” says Anthony, also standing up.

            “Yeah I need to go too; I’ve got tons o f studying to do.”

            “Well then bye,” says Anthony sadly.

            Walking away from Starbucks, Alex sadly thinks to himself, I may never see him again; I’ll never even know his name.

 

Author's Note

tell me any way i can make this longer; if i need to. also tell me if u like the descriptions

Reviews

[Mioki]

Interesting is the one word I'm getting from this. I was caught off guard at first by your present tense use, and although I'm not really fond of it, you've used it effectively. Since this is the prologue, I think it doesn't have to be too long. If you'd like, a little more description could lengthen it, but otherwise it's good so far.

[alec merdin]

lol i saw the starbucks and i was this has gotta be good lol ill give ya points for jsut that one thing alone