Sabes Lo Que Queiro

i wrote a guitar song to this. when the people read it, they were asking me if i could write them this poem so they can give it to their crushes. sabes lo que quiero means do you know what i want.

puedes aser eso?
dame todos estos cosas
no necesito regalos
tu eres me espiritu
y no me puedes cortar
todo el amor y felizidad
que me has dado

all this means=
can you do that?
give me all these things?
gifts don't matter
you are my spirit
and no cut can go deeper
than the love and happiness
you've given me

 

 

sabes lo que quiero?
i want you to notice me
to gaze in my eyes
sabes lo que quiero?
i want you to speak to me
i need to hear your voice
i yearn for it
sabes lo que quiero?
i want you to hold me
tightly
and never let go
even if it is a small hug
sabes lo que quiero?
i want to hold your hand
as we walk the park
sabes lo que quiero?
i want to hear all your memories
to laugh
to see your smile
sabes lo que quiero?
i want to taste your lips
play with your tongue
sabes lo que quiero?
i want you to love me
to yearn for me
puedes aser eso?
dame todos estos cosas
no necesito regalos
tu eres me espiritu
y no me puedes cortar
todo el amor y felizidad
que me has dado

Reviews

[The Morbid The Merrier]

This was incredibly precious. Me encantó todo acerca de él, pero lo que arruinó la emoción y el vibe que estaba recibiendo desde el poema fue la traducción que hiciste en medio de ella. Tal vez se puede hacer otra versión que tiene el principio en inglés, pero el resto lo mismo. Congratulations on another great poem.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

I love it not many write in spanish and english in a poem at once and even so they may not make it good as this.Great work of art.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This touched my soul. Especially the language, reminded me of my husband who I lost 2 years ago. He was from Puerto Rico............Such a lovely piece, thank you for this