Heart Of The Sea

Heart Of The Sea

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Sonnet

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Dark night cool waters beckon love come forth

As its lapping echoes from shore to shore

Drawing waves kiss the sand and beg for more

Come, come love, listen intently thenceforth

 

Black waters viewed 'pon a cloudly blue night

Seagulls, pelicans have flown away home

Ocean's waves offer up varied honeycomb

Lovers have kissed again and taken flight

 

The heart of the sea's depths offers repose

Enticing addulation 'pon the waves

Short visits somehow many hearts enslave

Come again as waves stir evening primrose

 

The heart of the sea beckons juxtapose

Melancoly spirit thoughts now oppose

© 2013 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


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Excellent.
Dark is the heart of the cosmos that beckon us. Racing waves of solar energy. The ocean ripples with moon's reflections. I wish to drown in the yellow orange hydrogen furnace. I wish to drown in the shine brine the reflect the same shade as my hazel eyes. I wish to drown in love, in awe of all the wonder this reality has to offer. Let it swallow my poetic soul, leaving only a lite littering of poetry in my wake, and I will die a contented fool.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Joshua, Thanks for the poetic review of my work..I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to rea.. read more
Joshua Amos Graff

3 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Okay..Sara



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Mysterious, with a beauty penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Eric, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you stopping by..Your comments are uplifting..Sa.. read more
vivid imagery in this wonderfully composed rhyme! well done! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Indra,

Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent reading and takin.. read more
Indra Neil

3 Years Ago

u r welcome!
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Okay~~~Sara
Excellent.
Dark is the heart of the cosmos that beckon us. Racing waves of solar energy. The ocean ripples with moon's reflections. I wish to drown in the yellow orange hydrogen furnace. I wish to drown in the shine brine the reflect the same shade as my hazel eyes. I wish to drown in love, in awe of all the wonder this reality has to offer. Let it swallow my poetic soul, leaving only a lite littering of poetry in my wake, and I will die a contented fool.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Joshua, Thanks for the poetic review of my work..I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to rea.. read more
Joshua Amos Graff

3 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

3 Years Ago

Okay..Sara
nice one ... kudos for using the sonnet form .. i am terrible at it and must work hard to produce one .. i have a favorite line .. this one:
"Drawing waves kiss the sand and beg for more" it lends a hungry eternal element for me .. and who has not been hypnotized by the sea .. even a hills and forest man such as i! i feel serene having read your poem ..
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

4 Years Ago

EN,

Glad that this one brought some serenity to you world..I enjoy writing when my mu.. read more
How I love the sea... ache for it so often... and your words spoke into me so many reasons it has always captivated me... the wonder and depth and beauty is beyond compare.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have painted a beautiful picture here I could see it all great job
Ron

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

5 Years Ago

Wordman,

I have been lifted higher by your review of my work..

Thanking yo.. read more
Expressive and impressive...Bravo...............

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very beautiful poem. Very impressive work.
The sea can represent many things, love and heartache.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pax
wow, such beautiful sonnet... it was nice to see you coming back my friend and read your words is always refreshing... I adore this piece!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful sonnet...The poem has a great rhyming pattern and draws such a stunning picture of the sea in the reader's mind. The first verse itself just took my breath away! It was a pleasure to read.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

5 Years Ago

Divya,

Thanks for the uplifting review of my work..

Sara

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