Dance in this storm

Dance in this storm

A Poem by Saree Marcel
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Dance with me in this rain, The downpour will be the tempo...

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Dance with me in this rain,
Just you and me, 
 The downpour will be the tempo, 
And the thunder, the drums, 
 The lighting shall be paparazzi, 
 You can be the lead singer, 
And I'll hum along, 
Spin me around, 
 While the wind cheers us on, 
Whistling and yelling, 
Spin me in this turmoil, 
Dance with me in this storm

© 2020 Saree Marcel


Author's Note

Saree Marcel
If its a revolution without dancing,
Its a revolution not worth having

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This is so so so beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saree Marcel

1 Year Ago

thank you :)
Be by my side through it all...I beg of you! Rain good - sort of cleanses the soul but lightening an thunder are so frightening! Thank you for this profound piece!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saree Marcel

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! Much appreciated, friend
kitty

1 Year Ago

U R welcome!
If we are to have rain, and lately we have had plenty, this sounds like a decent way to the condition
A good fun write
Dave

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

1 Year Ago

thank you :)
LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! Living in drought-stricken California, I crave rain so I had to click on your poem. This is one of the best jazzy inspiring rain-themed poems I've seen lately. It makes a person want to get up & shake a leg. I love your wide variety of personifications, which brings the whole party alive. Love this! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

2 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoy. Haha- it's winter right now in Maine so I don't crave t.. read more
wow, I can totally picture this crazy dance and hear the sounds as it builds to a sunny climax after the storm has passed.


Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

2 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!
A wonderful and hopeful poem. To dance in a Summer rain with someone you love. Perfect place. Thank you Sarah for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review!
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Sarah.
Wonderful. Whimsical. Romantic and sweet yet I also sense something dark in this. Great work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Succinct and thoroughly enjoyable poem! This poem exudes a kind of kinetic energy to match the sensation of dancing in the rain.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

2 Years Ago

thank you so much :P
Dancing in the storm
Could just be to keep warm
Dance on one leg while putting waterproof trousers on
Got em on now we run
Inside until we see the sun


Only thing I could conjour up - Yes I liked it

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

2 Years Ago

thank you so much :) your review means a lot

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Added on July 9, 2018
Last Updated on January 29, 2020
Tags: Fights, dance, rain, storm, tempo, love

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Saree Marcel
Saree Marcel

Spit truth, bleed emotion, fight for love



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I'm the youth of WritersCafe, I'm 18. I discuss topics in rough manners. I do slam poetry mainly but I do like the calm lulling waves of destruction. A lot of you hate me for some reason? Is it t.. more..

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